KhronosGroup · gmlueck · Jan 11, 2024 · Dec 1, 2023 · Dec 14, 2023 · Jan 3, 2024
diff --git a/adoc/chapters/acknowledgements.adoc b/adoc/chapters/acknowledgements.adoc
@@ -90,6 +90,7 @@
   * Peter Thoman, University of Innsbruck
   * Biagio Cosenza, University of Salerno
   * Paul Preney, University of Windsor
+  * Atharva Dubey, Codeplay
 
 // Jon: in other specs we credit Khronos staff who have helped.
 // Ronan: indeed! Just reading this while actually adding the... Khronos

diff --git a/adoc/chapters/programming_interface.adoc b/adoc/chapters/programming_interface.adoc
@@ -17218,15 +17218,15 @@ a@
 template <access::address_space AddressSpace, access::decorated IsDecorated>
 void load(size_t offset, multi_ptr<const DataT, AddressSpace, IsDecorated> ptr)
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-   a@ Loads the values at the address of [code]#ptr# offset in elements of type [code]#DataT# by [code]#NumElements * offset#, into the components of this SYCL [code]#vec#.
+   a@ Loads [code]#NumElements# elements into the components of this SYCL [code]#vec#. These elements are loaded from consecutive addresses, where the starting address is computed by adding [code]#offset * NumElements * sizeof(DataT)# bytes to the address specified by the [code]#ptr#. The ptr must be aligned to [code]#alignof(DataT)#.
-   a@ Loads [code]#NumElements# elements into the components of this SYCL [code]#vec#. These elements are loaded from consecutive addresses, where the starting address is computed by adding [code]#offset * NumElements * sizeof(DataT)# bytes to the address specified by the [code]#ptr#. The ptr must be aligned to [code]#alignof(DataT)#.
+   a@ Loads [code]#NumElements# elements into the components of this SYCL [code]#vec#. These elements are loaded from consecutive addresses, where the starting address is computed by adding [code]#offset * NumElements * sizeof(DataT)# bytes to the address specified by the [code]#ptr#. The [code]#ptr# must be aligned to [code]#alignof(DataT)#.
-   a@ Loads [code]#NumElements# elements into the components of this SYCL [code]#vec#. These elements are loaded from consecutive addresses, where the starting address is computed by adding [code]#offset * NumElements * sizeof(DataT)# bytes to the address specified by the [code]#ptr#. The ptr must be aligned to [code]#alignof(DataT)#.
+   a@ Loads [code]#NumElements# elements into the components of this SYCL [code]#vec#. These elements are loaded from consecutive addresses, where the starting address is computed by adding [code]#offset * NumElements * sizeof(DataT)# bytes to the address specified by the [code]#ptr#. The [code]#ptr# must be aligned to [code]#alignof(DataT)#.
 
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 template <access::address_space AddressSpace, access::decorated IsDecorated>
 void store(size_t offset, multi_ptr<DataT, AddressSpace, IsDecorated> ptr) const
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-   a@ Stores the components of this SYCL [code]#vec# into the values at the address of [code]#ptr# offset in elements of type [code]#DataT# by [code]#NumElements * offset#.
+   a@ Stores [code]#NumElements# components of this SYCL [code]#vec# into consecutive addresses, with the starting address determined by adding [code]#offset * NumElements * sizeof(DataT)# to the address specified by the [code]#ptr#. The [code]#ptr# must be aligned to [code]#alignof(DataT)#.
 
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