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Editorial pass, 1. to 1.1.2 (fixes #298) #334

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Co-authored-by: Jeffrey Yasskin <jyasskin@google.com>
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Given the large volume of potential [=data=]-related decisions in today's data economy,
it is impossible for people to have detailed control over how their data is processed.
This fact should not be confused with the idea that privacy is dead. Studies show that
This fact does not imply that privacy is dead. Studies show that
[=people=] remain concerned over how their [=data=] is [=processed=], that they feel powerless
and have lost agency ([[?Privacy-Concerned]]). If we design out technological infrastructure
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carefully, we can give people greater [=autonomy=] with respect to their own [=data=]. This is
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