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Editorial tweaks based on ac-review (#1074)
* Drop extraneous article Caught during the AC review for approval of Process 2025 * fix stray reference to "the" member agreement As discussed in #879, as templates for the member agreement evolve over time, each member has their own agreement, and there isn't a singular member agreement. * Adjust word order for better readability * Add missing comma * Correct pluralization * Disammbiguate pronoun * Use clearer terminology * Crosslink * Improve syntax Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <tthibodeau@openlinksw.com> Co-authored-by: fantasai <fantasai.bugs@inkedblade.net>
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The [=CEO=] <em class="rfc2119">may</em> take disciplinary action,
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including suspending or removing for cause
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a participant in any group (including the [=AB=] and [=TAG=])
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if serious and/or repeated violations,
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if serious and/or repeated violations occur,
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such as failure to meet the requirements on individual behavior of
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(a) this process
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and in particular the Code of Conduct, or
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(b) the membership agreement, or
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(c) applicable laws,
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occur.
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and in particular the Code of Conduct,
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(b) their membership agreement, or
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(c) applicable laws.
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Refer to the <a href="https://www.w3.org/guide/process/suspension">Guidelines to suspend or remove participants from groups</a>.
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<h5 id="coi">
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(also known as <dfn export>Team Contact</dfn>),
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who acts as the interface between the [=Chair=],
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group participants,
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and the rest of the Team.
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and the rest of the [=Team=].
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Note: The <a href="https://www.w3.org/guide/teamcontact/role">role of the Staff Contact</a> [[TEAM-CONTACT]]
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is described in the <a href="https://www.w3.org/guide/">Art of Consensus</a> [[GUIDE]].
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is a major, not [=minor change|minor=], change.
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The following are examples of [=minor changes=]:
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the renaming or restructuring (e.g. splitting or combining) of existing in-scope deliverables,
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the addition of new [[#note-track|Note track]] deliverables that help explain the group’s work
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the addition of new [[#note-track|Note track]] deliverables that help explain the group’s work,
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a change of [=Staff Contact=],
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or a change of [=Chair=].
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[=Minor changes=], other than a change of [=Staff Contact=],
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A Call for Review to the Advisory Committee
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<em class="rfc2119">must</em> identify any [=Formal Objections=]
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related to that review.
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This requirement is waived
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These requirements are waived
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if the [=Formal Objection=] is resolved to the satisfaction of the objector
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before its <a href="#confidentiality-change">confidentiality is changed</a>.
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<p id=fo-mitigations>
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When [=overturning=] a decision,
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it <em class=rfc2199>should</em> recommend a way forward.
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the [=Council=] <em class=rfc2199>should</em> recommend a way forward.
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If the overturned decision has already had consequences
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pertaining to [=upheld=] aspects of the Formal Objection(s)
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(e.g., if the objection concerns material already in a published document)
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<li>
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<em class="rfc2119">must not</em> release this information to the general public or press,
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nor beyond the proper level of access.
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nor beyond the designated level of access.
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</ul>
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The [=Team=] <em class="rfc2119">must</em> provide mechanisms
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and of Recommendation Track Documents (see <a href="https://github.com/w3c/process/pull/831">Pull Request 831</a>).
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<li>
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Consolidate and harmonize into a <a href="#no-group-maintenance">one section</a>
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Consolidate and harmonize into <a href="#no-group-maintenance">one section</a>
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the various parts of the Process
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that described whether and how the Team can maintain technical reports
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that no longer have a Group chartered to maintain them.

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