simplify "why" section

undergroundwires · Sep 23, 2020 · 77c3d2b · 77c3d2b
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diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
@@ -22,14 +22,13 @@
 
 ## Why
 
-- You don't need to run any compiled software that has access to your system, just run the generated scripts.
-- Have full visibility into what the tweaks do as you enable them.
-- Ability to revert applied scripts
+- Rich tweak pool to harden security & privacy of the OS and other software on it
+- Free (both free as in beer and free as in speech)
+- No need to run any compiled software that has access to your system, just run the generated scripts
+- Have full visibility into what the tweaks do as you enable them
+- Ability to revert (undo) applied scripts
 - Easily extendable
-- Everything is open-sourced including both application and infrastructure
-  - Fully automated CI/CD pipeline using GitHub actions
-    - to AWS for provisioning serverless infrastructure
-    - for building and sharing the desktop applications
+- Everything is open-source and automated (both application and its infrastructure)
 
 ## Extend scripts
 

diff --git a/src/presentation/TheCodeArea.vue b/src/presentation/TheCodeArea.vue
@@ -22,10 +22,10 @@ const NothingChosenCode =
     .appendCommentLine(' 📙 Come back regularly to apply latest version for stronger privacy and security.')
     .appendLine()
     .appendCommentLine('-- 🧐 Why privacy.sexy')
-    .appendCommentLine(' ✔️ Rich tweak pool to harden security & privacy of the OS and other softwares on it.')
-    .appendCommentLine(' ✔️ You don\'t need to run any compiled software on your system, just run the generated scripts.')
+    .appendCommentLine(' ✔️ Rich tweak pool to harden security & privacy of the OS and other software on it.')
+    .appendCommentLine(' ✔️ No need to run any compiled software on your system, just run the generated scripts.')
     .appendCommentLine(' ✔️ Have full visibility into what the tweaks do as you enable them.')
-    .appendCommentLine(' ✔️ Free software, 100% transparency: both application & infrastructure code are open-sourced.')
+    .appendCommentLine(' ✔️ Open-source and free (both free as in beer and free as in speech).')
     .toString();
 
 @Component