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| SKlauncher is a game launcher for **Minecraft: Java Edition**, designed to offer players an easy-to-use, visually appealing interface for managing the game and installed modifications, along with a range of offline features. | ||||||
| SKlauncher is a game launcher for **Minecraft: Java Edition**, designed to offer players an easy-to-use, visually appealing interface for managing the game and installed modifications, along with a range of offline features like offline accounts. | ||||||
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There was a problem hiding this comment. Choose a reason for hiding this commentThe reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more. 💡 Verification agent ❓ Verification inconclusiveAvoid implying account/auth bypass; rephrase “offline accounts.” “Offline accounts” suggests circumventing authentication and may conflict with Mojang/Microsoft policies. If the product only offers an offline mode (e.g., single-player when auth is unavailable), say that explicitly. Apply this diff to clarify: -SKlauncher is a game launcher for **Minecraft: Java Edition**, designed to offer players an easy-to-use, visually appealing interface for managing the game and installed modifications, along with a range of offline features like offline accounts.
+SKlauncher is a game launcher for **Minecraft: Java Edition**, designed to offer players an easy-to-use, visually appealing interface for managing the game and installed modifications, including an offline mode for single‑player when authentication servers are unavailable.Rephrase “offline accounts” in docs/intro.mdx -SKlauncher is a game launcher for **Minecraft: Java Edition**, designed to offer players an easy-to-use, visually appealing interface for managing the game and installed modifications, along with a range of offline features like offline accounts.
+SKlauncher is a game launcher for **Minecraft: Java Edition**, designed to offer players an easy-to-use, visually appealing interface for managing the game and installed modifications, including an offline mode for single-player when authentication servers are unavailable.📝 Committable suggestion
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| For {new Date().getFullYear() - 2013} years, SKlauncher has enabled users to log in with their Mojang accounts (prior to the migration to Microsoft in 2023) or use Offline accounts, with the option to create an SKlauncher account. | ||||||
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| Since its inception, SKlauncher has been developed solely by **SKmedix**, who has served as the *primary developer*. In early 2023, **Foxer** joined the team as a *Front-End developer*. | ||||||
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| Although the team is small, **the community** plays an invaluable role: users contribute by *translating the launcher*, *testing* and reporting bugs, *moderating* the Discord server, and providing *support* to fellow users. | ||||||
| Although the team is small, **the community** plays an invaluable role: users contribute by *translating the launcher*, *testing* and reporting bugs, *moderating* the Discord server, and providing *support* to fellow users, and we are also having economic issues so if you can donate so donate us and we are offering free minectaft java so we are even in loss, thanks. | ||||||
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There was a problem hiding this comment. Choose a reason for hiding this commentThe reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more. This addition has an unprofessional tone and contains several grammatical errors, typos, and a potentially misleading statement, which are not suitable for official documentation.
For a more professional and clear document, I suggest rewriting this part and separating the call for donations into its own paragraph.
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There was a problem hiding this comment. Choose a reason for hiding this commentThe reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more. 🛠️ Refactor suggestion Remove donation plea and “free Minecraft Java” claim; fix tone/grammar. The current sentence is unprofessional, contains grammatical errors, and asserts offering “free Minecraft Java,” which poses legal/IP and reputational risk. Keep intro neutral, community-focused, and point to a Support/Donate page without implying free game licenses. Proposed rewrite: -Although the team is small, **the community** plays an invaluable role: users contribute by *translating the launcher*, *testing* and reporting bugs, *moderating* the Discord server, and providing *support* to fellow users, and we are also having economic issues so if you can donate so donate us and we are offering free minectaft java so we are even in loss, thanks.
+Although the team is small, **the community** plays an invaluable role: volunteers help with translations, testing and bug reports, Discord moderation, and user support. If you’d like to support development, please visit our Support page for ways to contribute.If you share the correct link/path for the Support/Donate page, I’ll update the copy accordingly. 📝 Committable suggestion
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The addition 'like offline accounts' is redundant, as offline accounts are already mentioned in the next paragraph. To keep the introduction concise and avoid repetition, it's best to remove this example.