Improve SQS docs #27
Improve SQS docs #27
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3-8: Improved introduction and documentation links.The changes to the introduction provide a clearer description of Amazon SQS and its role in the AWS ecosystem. The addition of the documentation link is helpful for users seeking more information.
Consider adding a brief mention of when one might choose to use SQS over other queue systems, to provide context for users new to the concept.
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12-39: Improved clarity in configuration settings.The updates to the connection settings provide better clarity, especially regarding the endpoint configuration. This addresses the confusion mentioned in the PR description about the relationship between region and endpoint.
For consistency, consider updating the comment for the
regionparameter (line 26) to match the style of thekeyandsecretcomments:# AWS Region. # Default: empty region: us-west-1
46-47: Suggestion to improve hint readability.The rewording of the hint improves clarity, but it can be further optimized to avoid wordiness.
Consider revising the hint to be more concise:
{% hint style="info" %} While all parameters have default values, most are required for correct driver configuration. {% endhint %}This revision maintains the meaning while reducing wordiness.
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53-58: Improved explanation of EC2 credential detection.The expanded hint provides valuable information about EC2 environment detection and credential usage, addressing the confusion mentioned in the PR objectives.
To further improve clarity, consider adding a brief explanation of when one might want to use explicit credentials over EC2 IAM identity. This could help users make informed decisions about their configuration.
123-173: Improved organization and clarity of configuration options.The updates to the configuration options section enhance readability and provide more detailed explanations. The addition of new options like
skip_queue_declarationandconsume_alloffers users more flexibility in configuring the SQS driver.For consistency, consider adding default values in the description for options where they are mentioned, similar to how it's done for the
prefetchoption. For example:### Skip Queue Declaration `skip_queue_declaration` - By default, RR tries to create the queue (using the `queue` name) if it does not exist. Set this option to `true` if the queue already exists. Default: `false`
199-200: Added important context about SQS tags.The new note about tags provides valuable information about their usage and potential performance impact. The link to AWS documentation is helpful for users seeking more information.
Consider rephrasing the first sentence for clarity:
Tags are metadata labels that don't affect queue behavior. Amazon SQS interprets tags as simple string attributes.This revision provides a clearer explanation of what tags are and how they are interpreted by Amazon SQS.
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1-200: Overall excellent improvements to SQS documentation.The changes in this PR significantly enhance the clarity and completeness of the SQS driver documentation. Key improvements include:
- Clearer explanation of SQS and its role in AWS
- Better descriptions of configuration settings, especially regarding region and endpoint
- Improved organization and explanations of configuration options
- Addition of important information about EC2 credential detection
- New sections on attributes and tags with relevant AWS documentation links
These updates effectively address the confusion mentioned in the PR description regarding SQS plugin requirements.
To further improve the documentation:
- Consider adding a brief "Getting Started" section with a minimal working configuration example.
- If applicable, include a troubleshooting section addressing common issues users might encounter when setting up or using the SQS driver.
These additions would make the documentation even more user-friendly, especially for those new to using SQS with RoadRunner.
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177-179: Added helpful context for SQS attributes.The new section on attributes provides useful information and a link to the AWS documentation, which will be valuable for users configuring queue attributes.
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Hello
I've cleaned up the documentation for the SQS plugin. There were a bunch of typos (you can also use the
can also use the) and some sentences that were redundant or hard to understand.
I have two questions though. I looked at the code for the SQS plugin, and I cannot understand why it's asking for both
regionandendpoint, when on AWS SQS, the region is always part of the endpoint, i.e.https://sqs.eu-west-1.amazonaws.com?Another thing I can't figure out is why/when
keyandsecretalso requiresession_token. If you only providekeyandsecretwhile in an EC2 environment, it seems they're not being used - I've never used session_token, so I'm not sure what this means.See: https://github.com/roadrunner-server/sqs/blob/master/sqsjobs/driver.go#L489-L491
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