bpo-33736: Improve the documentation of asyncio stream APIs #7326
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Improve the documentation of `asyncio.open_connection()`, `asyncio.start_server()` and their UNIX socket counterparts.
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| Improve the documentation of func:`asyncio.open_connection`, | |||
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Looks like there is a missing : before func.
| :meth:`~AbstractEventLoop.create_server()` except *protocol_factory*; most | ||
| common are positional *host* and *port*, with various optional keyword | ||
| arguments following. | ||
| When specified, the *loop* argument determines which event loop to use, |
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On line 47, consider adding:
The callback for a connected client, *client_connected_cb*, contains a *client_reader* and *client_writer*. ... The *client_connected_cb* parameter may be a plain callback function or a :ref:`coroutine function <coroutine>`. If the parameter is a coroutine function, it will be automatically converted into a :class:`Task`.
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I reworded the whole paragraph for clarity.
Doc/library/asyncio-stream.rst
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| Start a UNIX Domain Socket server, with a callback for each client connected. | ||
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| See :func:`start_server` for information about return value and other | ||
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| The *client_connected_cb* parameter is called with two parameters: |
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Perhaps add a few words for better reader understanding:
The callback for a connected client, *client_connected_cb*, contains a *client_reader* and *client_writer*.
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Thanks for the review @willingc! |
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Improve the documentation of
asyncio.open_connection(),asyncio.start_server()and their UNIX socket counterparts.https://bugs.python.org/issue33736