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@olivegamestudio olivegamestudio merged commit ac7cc3b into feature/MobileDeployment Sep 2, 2025
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Pull Request Overview

This PR restructures the mobile deployment documentation by breaking up a single comprehensive publishing chapter into smaller, more focused sections. The content has been reorganized from one large file covering both iOS and Android publishing into separate dedicated files for each platform plus additional supporting documents.

Key changes:

  • Split the original publishing chapter into 5 separate files for better organization
  • Created dedicated sections for Android publishing, iOS publishing, pre-publishing checklist, and conclusion
  • Maintained all original content while improving navigation and readability

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Copilot reviewed 5 out of 28 changed files in this pull request and generated 4 comments.

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04_publishing/index.md Trimmed to overview and bundle identifier concepts, removing platform-specific details
05_publishing_android/index.md New dedicated Android publishing guide with Google Play Store procedures
06_publishing_ios/index.md New dedicated iOS publishing guide with App Store Connect procedures
07_checklist/index.md New pre-submission checklist for app review process
08_conclusion/index.md New brief conclusion section wrapping up the tutorial series

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title: "06: Publishing to iOS App Store"
description: "Learn how to publish your MonoGame mobile application to both the iOS App Store with step-by-step guidance."
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The description mentions 'both the iOS App Store' but this file only covers iOS publishing. It should read 'to the iOS App Store' instead of 'to both the iOS App Store'.

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description: "Learn how to publish your MonoGame mobile application to both the iOS App Store with step-by-step guidance."
description: "Learn how to publish your MonoGame mobile application to the iOS App Store with step-by-step guidance."

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The image path for Figure 4-3 is incorrect. It references 'transporter-upload1.png' but should reference 'transporter-upload2.png' based on the caption indicating it's Step 2.

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Missing colon after 'Figure 4-5'. Should be 'Figure 4-5: Transporter' to match the formatting of other figure captions.

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The figure caption 'Figure 4-6: Transporter' is not descriptive. Based on the image filename 'testflight-build-assign-testers.png', it should be something like 'Figure 4-6: TestFlight Build Assign Testers' to match the actual content.

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