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我创建了一个有关BungeeCord和Geyser的教程

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非常感谢您的热情，总的来看，我个人认为这是一篇很好的博客，建议您发布一篇个人博客。

但是他作为一个将影响许多用户的文档来说，即使放在 ot 文档里面也很难称得上有意义，反而会使人更加迷惑。
要使它成为一篇合格的文档或许需要一次彻底的重写，注解数不等于行数的唯一原因就是里面有大量重复配置文件的内容。

总之再次感谢您的热情，希望我的注解能帮您理清文字的逻辑性，找到清楚地表达指导他人的内容的方法。

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1. **BungeeCord** 是由 SpigotMC 团队内部编写的有用软件。它充当玩家客户端和连接的 Minecraft 服务器之间的代理。 **BungeeCord** 的最终用户认为它与普通的 **Minecraft** 服务器之间没有区别。

1. 个人解释: 如果你使用该服务端，在你切换 **BungeeCord** 提供的服务器时你不用断线连接。
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这个句子似乎有点怪怪的？ 例如 “在服务器间切换的时候不需要断线重新连接” 的表述似乎更自然一点

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### 硬件

1. **处理器** 不少于 **2G**
1. **内存** 不少于 **4G**

#### 推荐配置

1. 处理器 | 单核跑分超过300 | 核心数不少于2
1. 内存 不少于4G
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这个表述似乎不是很清晰，跑分的标准也没有说。
如果希望表示性能需求的话，或许最好写清楚一点，或者也可以考虑不写，用一些判断标准来说明？

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1. 下载 **[SakuraFrp Launcher](https://www.natfrp.com/user/)**
1. 下载 **[BungeeCord](https://ci.md-5.net/job/BungeeCord/)**
1. 下载 **[Geyser-BungeeCord](https://geysermc.org/download)**
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如果要用 geyser 的话，是否考虑在文档标题里面提一下？

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1. 下载 **[Geyser-BungeeCord](https://geysermc.org/download)**
1. 下载 **[Java](https://www.java.com/zh-CN/)**

#### 更多的优化过的Java
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或许可以考虑直接一个链接放到 mc java 文档去？在那边会有更好的格式化，说的也更细致

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1. **[DragonWell Java](https://dragonwell-jdk.io/#/index)**
1. **[OpenJdk-OpenJ9](https://developer.ibm.com/languages/java/semeru-runtimes/downloads/)**

## 注释
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以目前的叙述来看，“注释” 放到前面来会影响文章的连贯性，是否考虑放到后面，在提到他们的时候给一个引用？

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1. 如果连接成功就配置完了。

### 示例(离线版)

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复读？为什么还要有这么大段的配置文件

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### 配置樱花FRP
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我们希望文档中提到我们的时候，术语是尽量一致的，这里的术语与其他几十篇文档都有些相悖。

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### 配置樱花FRP

请参考 [创建隧道](/app/mc.md#create-tunnel) 一节，在运行服务端的机器上创建并启动指向本机 `25577` 端口的 TCP 隧道和指向本机 `25577` 端口的 UDP 隧道。
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引用是好的，但是这里似乎无法完全引用，而且定死端口好像缺少一点说明？

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请参考 [创建隧道](/app/mc.md#create-tunnel) 一节，在运行服务端的机器上创建并启动指向本机 `25577` 端口的 TCP 隧道和指向本机 `25577` 端口的 UDP 隧道。

## 如何获取访问者的真实IP(示例)
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这里在其他文档是不是已经有了，复读配置文件是有必要的吗？

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## 它是什么

1. **BungeeCord** 是由 SpigotMC 团队内部编写的有用软件。它充当玩家客户端和连接的 Minecraft 服务器之间的代理。 **BungeeCord** 的最终用户认为它与普通的 **Minecraft** 服务器之间没有区别。
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这是不是机翻味有点重了，想要玩梗的话又好像不够重？

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按照要求修改了教程。

@HuaFangStudio HuaFangStudio changed the title Create mc-bungeecord Create mc-bungeecord(geyser) Sep 5, 2024
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修改了文件名

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Merge pull request #2 from HuaFangStudio/HuaFangStudio-patch-2
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Rename mc-bungeecord to mc-bungeecord(geyser)
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看起来仍然让人非常痛苦……如果周末有多余的时间和精力的话，我会尝试抽时间将它重写一遍。

这段文章中作为小白教程缺少了很多背景信息和操作指南，作为进阶用户的辅助又没有有意义的内容，看起来我的注解并没有让您体会到这件事，对于我无用的含蓄表达非常抱歉。
总之我还是建议把他作为一篇个人博客发表，要让他成为一篇文档可能需要的精力比重新写一篇还要多一些。

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