Comments on review of 5.0-rc1 for Ch.9 Env Mgmt

[naughtont3]

Problem

Issues identified during the 3/3/2025 review of Ch.9 edits since MPI-4.1, and additional review of pp.449-474.

Proposal

Fix few minor wording suggestions during reading and typos identified during review.

Changes to the Text

• pg.446, (pdfpg. 492) Advise to User (diff line 317), wording in last sentence
• pg.446-447 (pdf-pg.492-493) Wording to example caption "Splitting into NUMAnode...”
• pg.449, (pdfpg.495), Example 9.2, 2 typos (of) and extra comma (,)
• pg.450, (pdfpg.496), Example 9.3, 2 typos (of) and extra comma (,)
• pg.453, (pdfpg.499), Line 46-47, single sentence should be joined with line 47-48

Impact on Implementations

Clarify examples/text.

Impact on Users

Clarify examples/text.

References and Pull Requests

• https://github.com/mpi-forum/mpi-standard/pull/1044