(DOCSP-39147): Update SPM install instructions and privacy manifest details #3237
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source/sdk/swift/install.txt
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| To use the Privacy Manifest supplied by the SDK, build ``RealmSwift`` | ||
| as a dynamic framework. If you build ``RealmSwift`` as a static | ||
| framework, you must supply your own Privacy Manifest. To build | ||
| ``RealmSwift`` as a dynamic framework: |
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Minor suggestion: Maybe move "To build RealmSwift as a dynamic framework:" to a new line so that it offsets the procedural stuff a bit. Makes it easier to scan the page and pick up what the procedure is about.
source/sdk/swift/test-and-debug.txt
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| .. _swift-package-target-10-40-3-change: | |||
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Is the 10-40-3 supposed to reference the SDK version? If so, wouldn't it be 10-49-3? I may be misunderstanding the purpose of this ref.
source/sdk/swift/test-and-debug.txt
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| 1. In your project :guilabel:`Targets`, select your build target. | ||
| 2. Go to the :guilabel:`Build Phases` tab. | ||
| 3. Expand the :guilabel:`Link Binary With Libraries` element. | ||
| 4. Select either ``Realm`` or ``RealmSwift``, and click the :guilabel:`-` to |
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Is this an icon button in Xcode? Does it have alt text? This looks like a typo when rendered to the page.
If there's alt text, can we do something like "click the button (:guilabel:`-`)"?
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Hah, Cory usually tells me to remove "button" when I use it (old habit from old MMOS). I have never seen the alt text display, but I'm sure there must be some - let me see what I can figure out.
source/sdk/swift/test-and-debug.txt
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| 2. Go to the :guilabel:`Build Phases` tab. | ||
| 3. Expand the :guilabel:`Link Binary With Libraries` element. | ||
| 4. Select either ``Realm`` or ``RealmSwift``, and click the :guilabel:`-` to | ||
| remove the unneeded binary. For details about which binary to link with, |
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The "with" here confused me a bit. Can we go with "link" by itself?
| remove the unneeded binary. For details about which binary to link with, | |
| remove the unneeded binary. For details about which binary to link, |
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Jira ticket: https://jira.mongodb.org/browse/DOCSP-39147
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