Update English preface and add whois.pdf

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diff --git a/assets/whois.pdf b/assets/whois.pdf
diff --git a/translations/english/7.html b/translations/english/7.html
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <h3 id="7">Seven</h3>
-&ldquo;Sweet Kimchi&rdquo;
 <p>
+&ldquo;Sweet Kimchi&rdquo;.
 This is a misnomer,
 for a preparation of fruits and vegetables of Japanese origin, not Korean.
 The traditional preparation was given to me by a Buddhist monk friend&mdash;&#8203;

diff --git a/translations/english/index.html b/translations/english/index.html
@@ -16,27 +16,29 @@ <h2 id="title">Grothendieck&rsquo;s Musings on Kimchi</h2>
       <p class="subtitle">Organized by Mike Pierce</p>
       <section>
         <p>
-        This is a working English translation
-        of Alexander Grothendieck&rsquo;s essay on kimchi. 
+        This is an English translation of 
+        <a target="_blank" href="https://www.ams.org/notices/200808/tx080800930p.pdf">Alexander Grothendieck</a>&rsquo;s essay on kimchi.
+        <!-- <a target="_blank" href="assets/whois.pdf">Alexander Grothendieck</a>&rsquo;s essay on kimchi. -->
         I have very little to do with the words;
-        I&rsquo;m simply organizing/&#8203;crowd&shy;sourcing and typesetting the trans&shy;lation via
+        I&rsquo;ve simply typeset and organized/&#8203;crowd&shy;sourced the trans&shy;lation via
         <a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/mikepierce/grothendieck-kimchi">GitHub</a>.
-        Please feel free to 
-        <a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/mikepierce/grothendieck-kimchi/issues">contribute</a> 
-        anything you can! 
-        Notably <a target=_blank" href="https://github.com/mikepierce/grothendieck-kimchi/issues">sections 6 and 7 still need translating</a>.
-        You can find a <a href="translations/french/">French transcription here</a>,
-        <!-- You can find a <a href="https://mikepierce.github.io/grothendieck-kimchi/translations/french/">French transcription here</a>,-->
-        but it <a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/mikepierce/grothendieck-kimchi/issues/9">needs some work</a>.
-        </p>
-        <p>
-        A scan of the original essay in French can be found 
-        <a target="_blank" href="http://www.ihes.fr/~damour/IMAGE/kimchi_grothendieck.pdf">here</a>.
-        If you don't know what kimchi is, then I encourage you to 
-        <a target="_blank" href="https://youtu.be/W4hvneKcPZI">watch this</a>.
+        The translation is based off 
+        <a target="_blank" href="http://www.ihes.fr/~damour/IMAGE/kimchi_grothendieck.pdf">this scan of the original essay</a>.
+        <!-- <a target="_blank" href="assets/source.pdf">this scan of the original essay</a>. -->
         The typesetting of this page is adapted from 
         <a target="_blank" href="https://edwardtufte.github.io/tufte-css/">Tufte CSS</a>.
         </p>
+        <p>
+        You can find a <a href="translations/french/">French transcription here</a>,
+        but it <a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/mikepierce/grothendieck-kimchi/issues/9">might contain errors</a>.
+        If you'd like to contribute to this project
+        (make suggestions for this English translation,
+        make corrections to the French transcription,
+        create a new translation, improve this website, etc) see 
+        <a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/mikepierce/grothendieck-kimchi/blob/master/CONTRIBUTING.md">contributing.md</a>
+        and please add your voice to the 
+        <a target="_blank" href="https://github.com/mikepierce/grothendieck-kimchi/discussions">discussions page</a>.
+        </p>
       </section>
 
       <h1 id="kimchi">Kimchi</h1>