Rebuild self-service article to reflect 4.69 changes, add self-service uninstall highlight to release notes #30030
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| When a vulnerability has no primary CVSS score in the [National Vulnerability Database (NVD)](https://nvd.nist.gov/), Fleet now shows the secondary score instead. This gives Security Engineers better visibility into potential risk and helps prioritize remediation. | |||
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| End users can now uninstall self-service software via the My device UI, in addition to being able to [install software](https://fleetdm.com/guides/software-self-service#installing-self-service-software-packages) from there. Software uninstalls initiated this way are tracked in Fleet's audit log. | |||
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@iansltx Do we need to call out the install software bit? That additional feels clunky.
" End users can now uninstall self-service software via the My device UI. Software uninstalls initiated this way are tracked in Fleet's audit log." reads a lot more clearly.
Alternately, if we want to keep the 'in addition' text it feels more natural in front:
"In addition to being able to install self-service software via the My device UI, end users can now also uninstall self-service software.Software uninstalls initiated this way are tracked in Fleet's audit log."
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Main reason for including was we link to the self-service install documentation, and don't have uninstall docs.
If we want to drop to just mentioning uninstall, I should update the self-service docs as part of this PR to include a paragraph or two on that action. Shouldn't take long, so sounds like I should?
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If we want to drop to just mentioning uninstall, I should update the self-service docs as part of this PR to include a paragraph or two on that action. Shouldn't take long, so sounds like I should?
Yeah. I feel like we should def update the self-service docs and then we can link to those docs from here. I imagine that will be right under the install docs so people will be aware. Since this is release notes, I think it's nice to be more direct on what's being released. Thanks!
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Cool. Will ping you for review again when this is ready, net of self-service guide updates.
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...and ready. Self-service article was actually pretty out of date, so revamped that quite a bit to take the frontend rebuild into account.
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@iansltx I believe that the company style guide has us writing 'Select' instead of 'Click' throughout.
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Got it. Was reusing existing text but will swap it since we're already changing all the things.
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@eugkuo Got another revision for you. Marked existing feedback as resolved mainly because content has changed out from under it 2x at this point so it's harder to track what still needs changing. |
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