[DOCS] Improves Management section in docs #56669
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| [[advanced-options]] | |||
| == Setting advanced options | |||
| == Advanced Settings | |||
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Advanced Settings or Advanced settings?
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| [[index-lifecycle-policies]] | |||
| == Index lifecycle policies | |||
| == Index Lifecycle Policies | |||
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Why is it Index Lifecycle Policies in the title if it is index lifecycle policies on line 12?
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| [[managing-licenses]] | |||
| == License management | |||
| == License Management | |||
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| When you install the default distribution of {kib}, you receive a basic license | |||
| with no expiration date. For the full list of free features that are included in | |||
| the basic license, see https://www.elastic.co/subscriptions[the subscription page]. | |||
| A rollup job is a periodic task that aggregates data from indices specified | ||
| by an index pattern and rolls it into a new index. Rollup indices are a good way to | ||
| compactly store months or years of historical | ||
| A rollup job is a periodic task that aggregates data from indices specified |
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How about:
A rollup job is a periodic task that aggregates data from indices specified by an index pattern, then rolls the data into a new index.
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| Create a job that periodically aggregates data from one or more indices and |
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Create a job that periodically aggregates data from one or more indices, then rolls the data into a new, compact index.
| The fields for the index pattern are listed in a table. Click a column header to sort the table by that column. Click | ||
| the *Controls* button in the rightmost column for a given field to edit the field's properties. You can manually set | ||
| the field's format from the *Format* drop-down. Format options vary based on the field's type. | ||
| The *Index patterns* UI in *Management* helps you create and manage |
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Since we are already in the Management section, could this just say "The Index patterns UI ...."?
| status of your license, start a trial, or install a new license. | ||
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| NOTE: You can start a trial only if your cluster has not already activated a | ||
| trial license for the current major product version. For example, if you have | ||
| already activated a trial for v6.0, you cannot start a new trial until | ||
| already activated a trial for v6.0, you cannot start a new trial until |
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v6.0 or version 6.0 or 6.0?
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| {kib} *Management* provides user interfaces for working with data from remote | ||
| clusters and managing the {ccr} process. You can replicate indices from a | ||
| {kib} *Management* provides user interfaces for working with data from remote |
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Work with data from remote clusters and manage the {ccr} process.
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| [[managing-saved-objects]] | |||
| == Saved objects | |||
| == Saved Objects | |||
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| *Saved Objects* helps you keep track of and manage your saved objects. These objects | |||
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Instead of starting all of these sections with "[Feature] helps you...", how about just starting with what the UI helps the user do? So for this one, it would be:
Keep track of and manage your saved objects.
| {kib} makes it easy for you to create a rollup job by walking you through | ||
| the process. You fill in the name, data flow, and how often you want to roll | ||
| up the data. Then you define a date histogram aggregation for the rollup job | ||
| and optionally terms, histogram, and metrics aggregations. |
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* [DOCS] Improves Management section in docs * [DOCS] Fixes build error * [DOCS] Incorporates review comments in management docs
* [DOCS] Improves Management section in docs * [DOCS] Fixes build error * [DOCS] Incorporates review comments in management docs
* [DOCS] Improves Management section in docs * [DOCS] Fixes build error * [DOCS] Incorporates review comments in management docs
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