Improve acro score of new article #15256
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Thank you for the review! Co-Authored-By: MSDN.WhiteKnight <35516665+MSDN-WhiteKnight@users.noreply.github.com>
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* Increased acro from 80-91 * Apply suggestions from code review Thank you for the review! Co-Authored-By: MSDN.WhiteKnight <35516665+MSDN-WhiteKnight@users.noreply.github.com>
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@MSDN-WhiteKnight Please review and make sure I didn't make anything unclear. I used our internal tool to scan for where things can be simplified (language wise) to help translation into other languages.
I cut out some clauses that don't add value, such as:
Reference assemblies are usually distributed with the Software Development Kit (SDK) of a particular platform or library, a special software component installed only on developer machines - , a special software component installed only on developer machinesSomeone reading this article is probably familiar with what an SDK is and we don't need to it explain it to them.