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Спасибо, скоро поревьюим и добавим обязательно!

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Besides a couple of issues with formatting, looks good to me 👍

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On September 17 and 18, 2019, priests and teachers were indignant by the absurdity of this and they issue public letters in which they express their opinion: the case must be stopped, and the innocent must be released. We, IT-specialists, see a request for all professional communities to express their position on this matter, and we also cannot remain silent.

One of the defendants in the “Moscow affair” is our colleague, Aidar Gubaidulin. Aidar graduated from Moscow Institute of Physics and Technology and works at Sberbank-Technology. At the same time, our other colleague, programmer Konstantin Kotov, was convicted: he received 4 years in prison for ** participation ** in four actions, because, according to the prosecution, he pursued "the goal of creating a real threat to the constitutionally protected rights and freedoms of man and citizen" .
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Fix markdown: ** participation ** -> **participation**

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One of the defendants in the “Moscow affair” is our colleague, Aidar Gubaidulin. Aidar graduated from Moscow Institute of Physics and Technology and works at Sberbank-Technology. At the same time, our other colleague, programmer Konstantin Kotov, was convicted: he received 4 years in prison for ** participation ** in four actions, because, according to the prosecution, he pursued "the goal of creating a real threat to the constitutionally protected rights and freedoms of man and citizen" .
One of the defendants in the “Moscow affair” is our colleague, Aidar Gubaidulin. Aidar graduated from Moscow Institute of Physics and Technology and works at Sberbank-Technology. At the same time, our other colleague, programmer Konstantin Kotov, was convicted: he received 4 years in prison for **participation** in four actions, because, according to the prosecution, he pursued "the goal of creating a real threat to the constitutionally protected rights and freedoms of man and citizen".

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One of the defendants in the “Moscow affair” is our colleague, Aidar Gubaidulin. Aidar graduated from Moscow Institute of Physics and Technology and works at Sberbank-Technology. At the same time, our other colleague, programmer Konstantin Kotov, was convicted: he received 4 years in prison for ** participation ** in four actions, because, according to the prosecution, he pursued "the goal of creating a real threat to the constitutionally protected rights and freedoms of man and citizen" .

Those facts once again demonstrate the diversity of people affected by the repressions: in 2019 in Russia, anyone can become a defendant in political affairs for anything and for nothing. You can learn more about the participants in the case on the [site] dedicated to him (https://delo212.ru/arestanty).
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Fix markdown:

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Those facts once again demonstrate the diversity of people affected by the repressions: in 2019 in Russia, anyone can become a defendant in political affairs for anything and for nothing. You can learn more about the participants in the case on the [site] dedicated to him (https://delo212.ru/arestanty).
Those facts once again demonstrate the diversity of people affected by the repressions: in 2019 in Russia, anyone can become a defendant in political affairs for anything and for nothing. You can learn more about the participants in the case on [the site dedicated to him](https://delo212.ru/arestanty).

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# Открытое письмо специалистов IT-индустрии в защиту фигурантов «московского дела»
# Public letter from IT specialists to the defense of the people involed in "Mocsow criminal case".
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"to the defense of the people involed in" -> "in support of defendants in the"

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Mocsow -> Moscow :)

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# Открытое письмо специалистов IT-индустрии в защиту фигурантов «московского дела»
# Public letter from IT specialists to the defense of the people involed in "Mocsow criminal case".

[27 July 2019](https://ovdinfo.org/news/2019/07/27/miting-u-merii-moskvy-27-iyulya-2019-goda-i-ego-posledstviya-onlayn) people went out peacefully without weapons, just to express their disagreement with [prohibition of independent candidates](https://www.bbc.com/russian/features-49127945) before the elections to the Moscow City Duma. This event was an occasion to initiate a new round of political repressions and to open a case of "mass riots", 13 people were involved in.
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"prohibition of independent candidates before the elections to the Moscow City Duma" -> "banning independent candidates from Moscow City Duma elections"

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"was an occasion to initiate a new round of" -> "was used as an excuse for a new round of"

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[27 July 2019](https://ovdinfo.org/news/2019/07/27/miting-u-merii-moskvy-27-iyulya-2019-goda-i-ego-posledstviya-onlayn) people went out peacefully without weapons, just to express their disagreement with [prohibition of independent candidates](https://www.bbc.com/russian/features-49127945) before the elections to the Moscow City Duma. This event was an occasion to initiate a new round of political repressions and to open a case of "mass riots", 13 people were involved in.

Journalists, witnesses and participants note that the action was performed exclusively peacefully: there were no any damage to the property or any violence from the demonstrators. But this didn't prevent interrogators from bringing charges, and judges, rejecting all requests by the defense, to convict - in incredibly short time. [Konstantin Kotov (4 years in prison)] (https://www.interfax.ru/russia/675323), [Ivan Podkopaev (3 years in prison)] (https: // www. interfax.ru/moscow/674950), [Pavel Ustinov (3.5 years in prison)] (https://www.interfax.ru/russia/676593).

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"no any damage" я бы заменил на "no damage"

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prevent -> stop

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interrogators -> siloviki?

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Prosecutors?

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Prosecutors тоже норм.

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fcFn commented Sep 19, 2019

Не посмотрел, что PR уже есть, и сделал свой вариант перевода. Если что-то оттуда вам больше понравится, возьмите: https://github.com/fcFn/case-212/blob/english-version/README-en.md

@igorkamyshev igorkamyshev added the enhancement New feature or request label Sep 19, 2019
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Если версия устраивает, то не тяните с этим, вливайте. Моё дело было перевод сделать, а если хочется форматирование другое, английскую/русскую версию в разные файлы, ссылки добавить, gh-pages прикрутить (улучшить), то давайте это уже потом. Думаю, сам текст письма и его наличие даже чуть важнее количества подписавших (которое, я так понимаю, продолжает расти в геометрической прогрессии?).

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futpib commented Sep 19, 2019

Добавил отдельным файлом в #1125, всем спасибо

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