Text tweaks from public feedback #149
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| HOMEVAL_ASSESSMENT_CARD_TABLE = "pinval.vw_assessment_card" | ||
| HOMEVAL_COMP_TABLE = "pinval.vw_comp" | ||
| HOMEVAL_DATA_DICT_TABLE = "pinval.vars_dict" | ||
| HOMEVAL_DATA_DICT_TABLE = "z_ci_update_vars_dict_bldg_sqft_desc_pinval.vars_dict" |
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Reminder: Revert before merging
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Looking good! Unfortunately, I am yet again second guessing the exact phrasing of these headers... tagging in @ccao-jardine for feedback on my feedback as well. I don't think it's a huge deal, and I don't necessarily think we need to redeploy the reports even if we do change these two headers, because I could easily just tweak the HTML in a live report to see what it looks like.
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| <h2 class="mb-3">Top 5 Most Significant Sales</h2> | ||
| <h2 class="mb-3">The Most Significant Sales</h2> |
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[Nitpick, optional] Sorry for changing my mind yet again, but looking at it again today, this reads a bit weird to me -- kind of vague and mysterious, sort of like a book title more than a section header. Adding slightly more context makes it sound better to me, but maybe I'm overthinking it. What do you think?
| <h2 class="mb-3">The Most Significant Sales</h2> | |
| <h2 class="mb-3">The Most Significant Sales for Your Home</h2> |
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I concur -- while our work can be mysterious and important, HomeVal should be clear and accessible. Thanks for flagging this! I do think that it is an improvement over "Top 5", but I'll join your overthinking.
Hmm. Now that I've reviewed this in context, I'm reminded that this header is also the first part of the report that even mentions significant sales, outside of the expandable "Click or tap to read more about this report" accordion (which we shouldn't assume people will read through).
"The Most Significant Sales for Your Home" feels a bit awkward, like we should either mean "Sales of my home" (not the correct description of what is to follow) or sales that are important to a home (homes probably don't have feelings about sales).
Thoughts on "The Most Significant Sales Used to Estimate Your Home's Value"? It's appreciably longer, which I don't like, but it doesn't look as bad as I would have thought on mobile (below width: 360 pixels). It still feels a little clunky to me.
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@jeancochrane, @wagnerlmichael: Let's revert. Let's keep "Top 5 Most Significant Sales" until we have substantial evidence from multiple users that it's confusing enough to change. Thoughts?
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Works for me! in that case, should we close this PR, and then merge ccao-data/data-architecture#926? @jeancochrane
| id="sale-characteristics-{{ .card.card_num }}" | ||
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| Characteristics for Top 5 Most Significant Sales | ||
| Characteristics for the Most Significant Sales |
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[Nitpick, optional] Similar to above, I'm feeling like "for" is not quite the right preposition here. "Of" sounds more natural to me, and matches the way we phrase the "summary" header below. Does that sound better to you too?
| Characteristics for the Most Significant Sales | |
| Characteristics of the Most Significant Sales |
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Edit the language from 'top 5 significant sale' to 'significant sales'. The top 5 language could be confusing as it could be interpreted as referring to market value.
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Closes part of #147