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@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ footer:
 
 homepage_content:
   title: "<span class=\"animate1\">Exchange,</span> <span class=\"animate2\">Decentralized.</span>"
-  intro: "Bisq is an open-source, peer-to-peer application that allows you to buy and sell cryptocurrencies in exchange for national currencies. No registration required."
+  intro: "Buy and sell bitcoin for fiat (or other cryptocurrencies) privately and securely using Bisq's peer-to-peer network and open-source desktop software. No registration required."
   buttonWindows: Download for Windows
   buttonMac: Download for Mac
   buttonDebian: Download for Debian/Ubuntu
@@ -56,21 +56,21 @@ homepage_content:
   currentVersion: Current Version
   hFeatures: Features
   hIdentityVerifications: No Identity Verification
-  pIdentityVerifications: Instantly Accessible. No need for registration or approval from a central authority.
+  pIdentityVerifications: Get started in minutes. No need to wait for approval from a central authority.
   hDecentralized: Decentralized
   pDecentralized: Trading takes place on a global P2P network of users running Bisq on their own machines.
   hSafe: Safe
-  pSafe: "Bisq never holds your funds. Security deposits and multisig trade wallets encourage safe, successful trades."
+  pSafe: "Bisq never holds your funds. Deposits held in 2-of-2 multisig wallets encourage safe, successful trades."
   hPrivate: Private
-  pPrivate: No one except trading partners exchange personally identifying data. All personal data is stored locally.
+  pPrivate: Your data is stored locally on-disk, and is never sent to a central server. Every Bisq node is a Tor hidden service by default.
   hSecure: Secure and Always On
   pSecure: End-to-end encrypted communication routed over Tor and no down time.
   hOpen: Open
-  pOpen: "<p class=\"grey px-md-5\">Code is <a href=\"https://github.com/bisq-network/bisq\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">open source</a>, and project strategy is discussed openly on <a href=\"https://keybase.io/team/bisq\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Keybase</a> and <a href=\"https://github.com/bisq-network/bisq\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">GitHub</a>.</p>"
+  pOpen: "<p class=\"grey px-md-5\">Code is <a href=\"https://github.com/bisq-network/bisq\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">open-source</a>, and project strategy is discussed openly on <a href=\"https://keybase.io/team/bisq\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Keybase</a> and <a href=\"https://github.com/bisq-network/bisq\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">GitHub</a>.</p>"
   hEasy: Easy to Use
-  pEasy: "<p class=\"grey px-md-5\">We've made all this sophistication simple—<a href='https://docs.bisq.network/getting-started' target='_blank' rel=\"noopener\">make your first trade</a> in under 10 minutes!</p>"
+  pEasy: "<p class=\"grey px-md-5\">We've made all this sophistication simple—<a href='/getting-started'>make your first trade</a> in under 10 minutes!</p>"
   hBisqDao: The Bisq DAO
-  pBisqDao1: Decentralized governance for a decentralized exchange.
+  pBisqDao1: Decentralized governance for a decentralized exchange, built on top of Bitcoin.
   pBisqDao2: Learn more here
   hGetStarted: How to Get Started
   divGetStarted: "With Bisq, you can start trading in less than 10 minutes:"