Follow-Up challenge

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 > 🐶 Curated list of Web Security materials and resources.
 
-Needless to say, most of websites on-line are suffered from various type of bugs, which might eventually lead to vulnerabilities. Why would this happen so often? Many factors can be involved, including misconfiguration, shortage of engineers' security skills, and etc. Therefore, here is the curated list of Web Security materials and resources for learning the cutting edge penetrating techniques.
+Needless to say, most websites suffer from various types of bugs which may eventually lead to vulnerabilities. Why would this happen so often? There can be many factors involved including misconfiguration, shortage of engineers' security skills, etc. To combat this, here is a curated list of Web Security materials and resources for learning cutting edge penetrating techniques.
 
 *Please read the [contribution guidelines](CONTRIBUTING.md) before contributing.*
 
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-<p align="center"><b>🌈 Want to strengthen your penetration skills?</b><br>I would recommend to play some <a href="https://github.com/apsdehal/awesome-ctf" target="_blank">awesome-ctf</a>s.</p>
+<p align="center"><b>🌈 Want to strengthen your penetration skills?</b><br>I would recommend playing some <a href="https://github.com/apsdehal/awesome-ctf" target="_blank">awesome-ctf</a>s.</p>
 
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-If you like this and would like to support it. Check out my [patreon page](https://www.patreon.com/boik) :)
-And don't forget to check out my [repos](https://github.com/qazbnm456) 🐾 or say *hi* on my [Twitter](https://twitter.com/qazbnm456) as well!
+If you enjoy this awesome list and would like to support it, check out my [Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/boik) page :)<br>Also, don't forget to check out my [repos](https://github.com/qazbnm456) 🐾 or say *hi* on my [Twitter](https://twitter.com/qazbnm456)!
 
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