Cookies Page

- update content according to May review

src/routes/cookies/+page.markdoc

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 You may have the right to decide whether to accept or reject cookies. When you access our Site, you are presented with a cookie consent mechanism that allows you to accept or reject cookies that are not essential cookies. You may also control cookies by setting your browser to turn off cookies as described further below. If you turn off cookies, web beacon and other technologies will still detect your visits to our Site; however, they will not be associated with information otherwise stored in cookies.
 
-## Targeted advertising
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-Third parties may drop cookies on your computer or mobile device to serve advertising through our website. These companies may use information about your visits to this and other websites to provide relevant advertisements about goods and services that you may be interested in. They may also employ technology that is used to measure the effectiveness of advertisements. The information collected through this process does not enable us or them to identify your name, contact details, or other personally identifying details unless you choose to provide these to us.
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 ## How do we use cookies?
 
 We use cookies to:
@@ -148,7 +144,18 @@ To opt out of being tracked by Google Analytics across all websites, visit [here
 
 When using our website, you may be directed to other websites for activities such as surveys, making payments in currencies other than U.S. dollars, or job applications. These websites may use their own cookies. We do not have control over the placement of cookies by other websites you visit, even if you are directed to them from our website.
 
-If you use the buttons that allow you to share products and content with your friends via social networks like Facebook, Twitter, Google, YouTube, GitHub, Betterstack, Hubspot, Shopify, Homerun, Paypal, Logrocket, LinkedIn, Mixpanel, and Clearbit, these companies may set a cookie on your computer memory. Find out more about these [here](https://www.facebook.com/privacy/policy/?entry_point=data_policy_redirect&entry=0), [here](https://twitter.com/en/privacy), [here](https://policies.google.com/privacy?hl=en-GB), [here](https://docs.github.com/en/site-policy/privacy-policies/github-privacy-statement), [here](https://betterstack.com/privacy), [here](https://legal.hubspot.com/privacy-policy), [here](https://www.shopify.com/legal/privacy), [here](https://homerun.app/privacy-policy/), [here](https://www.paypal.com/us/legalhub/privacy-full), [here](https://logrocket.com/privacy/), [here](https://www.linkedin.com/legal/privacy-policy), and [here](https://mixpanel.com/legal/privacy-policy), and [here](https://dashboard.clearbit.com/privacy).
+If you use the buttons that allow you to share products and content with your friends via social networks like Facebook, Twitter, Google, YouTube, GitHub, Betterstack, Hubspot, Shopify, Homerun, Paypal, Logrocket, LinkedIn, Mixpanel, and Clearbit, these companies may set a cookie on your computer memory.
+Find out more about these
+[here](https://www.facebook.com/privacy/policy/?entry_point=data_policy_redirect&entry=0),
+[here](https://twitter.com/en/privacy),
+[here](https://policies.google.com/privacy?hl=en-GB),
+[here](https://docs.github.com/en/site-policy/privacy-policies/github-privacy-statement),
+[here](https://betterstack.com/privacy), [here](https://legal.hubspot.com/privacy-policy),
+[here](https://www.shopify.com/legal/privacy), [here](https://homerun.app/privacy-policy/),
+[here](https://www.paypal.com/us/legalhub/privacy-full), [here](https://logrocket.com/privacy/),
+[here](https://www.linkedin.com/legal/privacy-policy), and
+[here](https://mixpanel.com/legal/privacy-policy), and
+[here](https://dashboard.clearbit.com/privacy).
 
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