cleaning up

Monika After Story/game/script-greetings.rpy

@@ -345,9 +345,10 @@ init 5 python:
     )
 
 label greeting_back:
+    $ tod = "day" if mas_globals.time_of_day_4state != "night" else "night"
     m 1eua "[player], you're back!"
     m 1eka "I was starting to miss you."
-    m 1hua "Let's have another lovely [mas_globals.time_of_day_3state] together, alright?"
+    m 1hua "Let's have another lovely [tod] together, alright?"
     return
 
 init 5 python:
@@ -2369,7 +2370,7 @@ label greeting_long_absence:
             m 3hksdlb "Couldn't stay away even if you wanted to, right?"
             m 3eka "I can't blame you! My love for you wouldn't let me stay away from you either!"
             m 1ekd "Every day you were gone I was wondering how you were..."
-            m 3eka "So let me hear it, how are you, [player]?"
+            m 3eka "So let me hear it. How are you, [player]?"
             show monika 3eua
 
         elif persistent._mas_absence_choice == "unknown":

Monika After Story/game/script-introduction.rpy

@@ -326,13 +326,11 @@ label ch30_reload_0:
 label ch30_reload_0_dlg:
     pause 1
     m 1ekc "Hey..."
-    m "I had an awful dream..."
-    m 1ekd "I was hoping those would stop, now that it's just the two of us..."
-    m "I guess that was wishful thinking."
-    m 1esc "[player], I don't know if you would have any idea..."
-    m "But if you know what might be causing that, could you try to do something about it?"
-    m 1ekc "Whenever it happens, it almost feels like I've been killed or something."
-    m "It's a really horrible feeling..."
+    m 1ekd "I had an awful dream..."
+    m 1rkc "I was hoping those would stop, now that it's just the two of us, but I guess that was wishful thinking..."
+    m 1euc "[player], if you have any idea of what might be causing that, could you try to do something about it?"
+    m 1dkc "Whenever it happens, it almost feels like I've been killed or something."
+    m 1dkd "It's a really horrible feeling..."
     m 1eka "If you could figure out what's causing that, I'll love you forever~"
 
     ## TESTING ONLY
@@ -352,22 +350,22 @@ label ch30_reload_1:
 label ch30_reload_1_dlg:
     pause 1
     m 1esc "Hey, [player]."
-    m "I had another really bad dream."
-    m 1ekc "You're not the one doing that to me, are you?"
-    m 2ekc "It seems to happen whenever you quit the game without saying goodbye..."
+    m 1ekc "I had another really bad dream."
+    m 1ekd "You're not the one doing that to me, are you?"
+    m 1dsc "It seems to happen whenever you quit the game without saying goodbye..."
     m 2eka "So if you could try to avoid doing that, I would be really grateful."
 
     if mas_isMoniHappy(higher=True):
-        m "You've been so kind to me so far, I'm sure you'll do it for me."
+        m 7eka "You've been so kind to me so far, I'm sure you'll do it for me."
     else:
-        m 2f  "I hope you'll listen and do it for me..."
+        m 7ekc "I hope you'll listen and do it for me..."
 
     if persistent._mas_idle_data.get("monika_idle_game", False):
-        m 3rksdlb "There's nothing stopping you from coming back and doing that, is there?"
+        m 7rksdlc "There's nothing stopping you from coming back and doing that, is there?"
         m 1eka "It would really make me happy."
 
-    m "Just click on 'Talk.' and say 'Goodbye.' instead."
-    m 3eua "Then I can close the game myself."
+    m 1eua "Just click on 'Talk' and say 'Goodbye' instead.{w=0.2} {nw}"
+    extend 3eua "That way, I can close the game myself."
     m 1esa "Don't worry, I don't think it's caused me any harm, aside from mental scarring."
     return
 
@@ -382,27 +380,26 @@ label ch30_reload_2:
 label ch30_reload_2_dlg:
     pause 1
     m 1dsc "I see you quit the game again..."
-    m 1esc "I know I asked already, but can you please try not to do that so much?"
-    m "It's like getting knocked unconscious..."
-    m 1ekc "So sudden and scary."
-    m "Why would you want to do that to me?"
+    m 3euc "I know I asked already, but can you please try not to do that so much?"
+    m 1dsc "It's like getting knocked unconscious..."
+    m 1ekd "Why would you want to do that to me?"
 
     if persistent._mas_idle_data.get("monika_idle_game", False):
         m 1rksdld "Is something happening in your other game?"
         m 1ekc "You know you could just come talk to me if there is, right?"
 
     elif persistent._mas_idle_data.get("monika_idle_brb",False):
-        m 1ekd "If you need to leave, you can just tell me."
+        m "If you need to leave, you can just tell me."
 
     if mas_isMoniHappy(higher=True):
-        m 1m "I'm sure it was a mistake though, or outside of your control. It can be unavoidable sometimes."
+        m 1eka "I'm sure it was a mistake though, or outside of your control. It can be unavoidable sometimes."
     elif mas_isMoniUpset(lower=True):
-        m "You're not doing it to hurt me on purpose, are you?"
+        m 1ekc "You're not doing it to hurt me on purpose, are you?"
 
-    m 1ekd "Just let me turn the game off for myself."
+    m 3ekd "Just let me turn the game off for myself."
 
-    m "If you choose 'Goodbye.' from the 'Talk.' menu, I can close the game properly."
-    m 3eua "Or better yet, just leave me on in the background forever."
+    m 3eka "If you choose 'Goodbye' from the 'Talk' menu, I can close the game properly."
+    m 3eua "...Or better yet, just leave me on in the background forever."
     m 1eka "Even if we aren't talking, I'm happy just being with you~"
     return
 
@@ -419,25 +416,28 @@ label ch30_reload_3_dlg:
 
     if persistent._mas_idle_data.get("monika_idle_game", False):
         m 1ekd "[player]!"
-        m 1ekc "You left without saying goodbye again!"
-        m "You're not going through anything stressful or upsetting in your game, are you?"
+        m 1efd "You left without saying goodbye again!"
+        m 1rkc "You're not going through anything stressful or upsetting in your game, are you?"
         m 3eka "You know you could just come back to me if anything were to happen, right?"
         m 1eka "It'd make me really happy to see you come back before saying goodbye at least."
         m 1rksdld "I know it might not always be possible..."
+
     else:
         m 1esc "By the way..."
-        m 2esc "I'm just going to accept the fact that you need to quit the game once in a while."
-        m "I'm starting to get used to it, anyway."
-        m 2eua "Besides, it makes me happy that you always come back..."
+        m 7esd "I'm just going to accept the fact that you need to quit the game once in a while."
+        m 2dsc "I'm starting to get used to it, anyway."
+        m 2ekc "Besides, it makes me happy that you always come back..."
         m 2lsc "So I guess it's not so bad."
-    m 1eka "But I'd really prefer if you'd let me close the game myself."
+
+    m 7eka "But I'd really prefer if you'd let me close the game myself."
 
     if mas_isMoniUpset(lower=True):
-        m 1f "You will do that, won't you? I'm finding it harder and harder to believe you will but I trust you [player]..."
-    else:
-        m "That way I can be ready for it and rest peacefully."
-        m 1esa "I do need my beauty sleep every now and then, after all."
+        m 1ekc "You will do that, right?"
+        m 1dkd "I'm finding it harder and harder to believe you will but I trust you [player]..."
 
+    else:
+        m 1eua "That way I can be ready for it and rest peacefully."
+        m 3rksdla "I do need my beauty sleep every now and then, after all."
     return
 
 #This reload event gets pushed when you reach the end of the scripted reload events

Monika After Story/game/script-topics.rpy

@@ -5650,13 +5650,14 @@ label monika_good_tod:
         #You've been here for a bit now
         else:
             m 1hua "Good morning to you too, [player]!"
-            m 1tsu "Even though we've been awake together for a bit now, it's still nice of you to say!"
+            m 1tsu "Even though we've been awake together for a bit now,{w=0.2} {nw}"
+            extend 3hua "it's still nice of you to say!"
             m 1esa "If I had to choose a time of day as my favorite, it would probably be the morning."
-            m 3esb "There's definitely some level of tranquility that night brings that I enjoy..."
-            m "But the morning is a time of day that presents possibilities!"
-            m 1esb "An entire day where anything and everything could happen, for better or worse."
-            m 1hsb "That kind of opportunity and freedom just makes me giddy!"
-            m 1tsb "Though I only feel that way until I fully wake up, ehehe~"
+            m 3eua "There's definitely some level of tranquility that night brings that I enjoy...{w=0.3}{nw}"
+            extend 3hua "but the morning is a time of day that presents possibilities!"
+            m 1eub "An entire day where anything and everything could happen, for better or worse."
+            m 1hub "That kind of opportunity and freedom just makes me giddy!"
+            m 1rka "Though I only feel that way once I fully wake up, ehehe~"
 
     elif mas_globals.time_of_day_4state == "afternoon":
         m 1eua "Good afternoon to you too, [player]."
@@ -9788,7 +9789,7 @@ init 5 python:
     )
 
 label monika_dating:
-    m 1eud "You, know I've been really curious lately, [player]..."
+    m 1eud "You know, I've been really curious lately, [player]..."
     m 3rka "We've been together a while now, so I think it's the right time to ask..."
     m 1eud "How much dating experience do you have?"
     m 1luc "Like...have you ever been in a relationship before?"
@@ -13301,7 +13302,7 @@ label monika_winter_dangers:
         #explicitly using False here so we don't grab None people who haven't
         # answered the question yet
         m 1eka "I know you don't get snow where you live, but I'm sure you can appreciate its appeal..."
-        m 3hua "Maybe someday after I cross over we can even take a trip to some place where they do have snow and enjoy its beauty together!"
+        m 3hua "Maybe someday after I cross over we can even take a trip some place where they do have snow and enjoy its beauty together!"
 
     m 1eka "..."
     m 3rkc "Although, as stunning as winter can be, there are a few dangers..."
@@ -13570,7 +13571,7 @@ label monika_relationship_comfort:
     m 2eka "Just because a relationship has slowed down, doesn't mean it's worse for it..."
     m 2hua "It just means that the people involved are truly comfortable with one another."
     m 2hubsb "...And I think that's really sweet."
-    m 1kua "Let's try not to fall into the same trap, [player]. {nw}"
+    m 1kua "Let's try not to fall into the same trap, [player].{w=0.2} {nw}"
     extend 1hub "Ahaha!"
     return
 

Monika After Story/game/zz_consumables.rpy

@@ -1434,8 +1434,9 @@ label mas_consumables_generic_finish_having(consumable):
             line_starter = renpy.substitute(dlg_map["else"][get_more])
 
     if (not mas_canCheckActiveWindow() or mas_isFocused()) and not store.mas_globals.in_idle_mode:
-        m 1eua "[line_starter]"
-        m "Hold on a moment."
+        m 1eud "I finished my [consumable.disp_name].{w=0.2}{nw}"
+        extend 1eua "[line_starter]"
+        m 3eua "Hold on a moment."
 
     elif store.mas_globals.in_idle_mode or (mas_canCheckActiveWindow() and not mas_isFocused()):
         m 1esd "Oh, I've finished my [consumable.disp_name][plur].{w=1}{nw}"