Doc-12350: technical writing review - #1956
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This pull request focuses on refining the documentation in README.md and doc/MigratingToCloudDeviceApi.md. Key changes include standardizing terminology (such as replacing 'e.g.' and 'i.e.' with 'for example'), correcting spelling, and making instructions more direct. Review feedback suggests further improving consistency by simplifying the Java version requirement and removing redundant phrasing in the timeout configuration section.
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Thank you Martin for your contribution!
I have addressed most of your feedback, and created new issues for aspects that require further attention.
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