From 0d097af1acbeabe56a1b0d0c2e2f521eca4defa8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Anne van Kesteren <annevk@annevk.nl>
Date: Tue, 23 Jan 2018 15:24:34 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Editorial: less continue after returning

This fixes EventSource and WebSocket to follow a more accepted pattern for "in parallel".

Fixes #692.
---
 source | 40 ++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 24 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/source b/source
index 6d9a5fe18db..a2c9a70bd10 100644
--- a/source
+++ b/source
@@ -93848,10 +93848,14 @@ dictionary <dfn>EventSourceInit</dfn> {
    <li><p>Set <var>ev</var>'s <span data-x="concept-event-stream-request">request</span> to
    <var>request</var>.</p></li>
 
-   <li><p>Return <var>ev</var>, but continue these steps <span>in parallel</span>.</p></li>
+   <li>
+    <p>Run this step <span>in parallel</span>:</p>
 
-   <!--FETCH--><li><p><span data-x="concept-fetch">Fetch</span> <var>request</var>.</p></li>
+    <ol>
+     <!--FETCH--><li><p><span data-x="concept-fetch">Fetch</span> <var>request</var>.</p></li>
+    </ol>
 
+   <li><p>Return <var>ev</var>.</p></li>
   </ol>
 
   <hr>
@@ -94689,24 +94693,28 @@ interface <dfn>WebSocket</dfn> : <span>EventTarget</span> {
    WebSocket protocol specification, then throw a <span>"<code>SyntaxError</code>"</span>
    <code>DOMException</code>. <ref spec=WSP></p></li>
 
-   <li><p>Return a new <code>WebSocket</code> object whose <span
-   data-x="concept-websocket-url">url</span> is <var>urlRecord</var>, but continue these steps
-   <span>in parallel</span>.</p></li>
-
    <li>
-    <p><span data-x="concept-websocket-establish">Establish a WebSocket connection</span> given
-    <var>urlRecord</var>, <var>protocols</var>, and the <span>entry settings object</span>. <ref
-    spec=FETCH></p>
+    <p>Run this step <span>in parallel</span>:</p>
+
+    <ol>
+     <li>
+      <p><span data-x="concept-websocket-establish">Establish a WebSocket connection</span> given
+      <var>urlRecord</var>, <var>protocols</var>, and the <span>entry settings object</span>. <ref
+      spec=FETCH></p>
 
-    <p class="note">If the <span data-x="concept-websocket-establish">establish a WebSocket
-    connection</span> algorithm fails, it triggers the <i data-x="concept-websocket-fail">fail the
-    WebSocket connection</i> algorithm, which then invokes the <i
-    data-x="concept-websocket-close">close the WebSocket connection</i> algorithm, which then
-    establishes that <i data-x="concept-websocket-closed">the WebSocket connection is closed</i>,
-    which fires the <code data-x="event-close">close</code> event <a href="#closeWebSocket">as
-    described below</a>.</p>
+      <p class="note">If the <span data-x="concept-websocket-establish">establish a WebSocket
+      connection</span> algorithm fails, it triggers the <i data-x="concept-websocket-fail">fail the
+      WebSocket connection</i> algorithm, which then invokes the <i
+      data-x="concept-websocket-close">close the WebSocket connection</i> algorithm, which then
+      establishes that <i data-x="concept-websocket-closed">the WebSocket connection is closed</i>,
+      which fires the <code data-x="event-close">close</code> event <a href="#closeWebSocket">as
+      described below</a>.</p>
+     </li>
+    </ol>
    </li>
 
+   <li><p>Return a new <code>WebSocket</code> object whose <span
+   data-x="concept-websocket-url">url</span> is <var>urlRecord</var>.</p></li>
   </ol>
 
   <hr>