use better, more accessible, grammar

Author: shlomif

FAQ.docbook5.xml.tt2

@@ -2901,9 +2901,11 @@ libpqueue</link>
 <para>
 There is a
 <link xlink:href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bisection_%28software_engineering%29">wikipedia
-page</link> that details the
-<link xlink:href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Version_control">VCS</link>
-technique, but it has a more general utility.
+page</link> that details the “bisecting” technique when used
+using
+<link xlink:href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Version_control">version control
+systems (= “VCSes”)</link>
+, but it has a more general applicability.
 </para>
 <para>
 As the old joke goes: &quot;How do you find a lion in the

FAQ.mdwn

@@ -1504,8 +1504,9 @@ of it are:
 
 There is a [wikipedia
 page](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bisection_%28software_engineering%29)
-that details the [VCS](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Version_control)
-technique, but it has a more general utility.
+that details the “bisecting” technique when used using [version control
+systems (= “VCSes”)](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Version_control) ,
+but it has a more general applicability.
 
 As the old joke goes: "How do you find a lion in the desert? You split
 the desert into two halfs, and the lion is in either one. Then you split

FAQ_with_ToC__generated.md

@@ -1595,8 +1595,9 @@ of it are:
 
 There is a [wikipedia
 page](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bisection_%28software_engineering%29)
-that details the [VCS](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Version_control)
-technique, but it has a more general utility.
+that details the “bisecting” technique when used using [version control
+systems (= “VCSes”)](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Version_control) ,
+but it has a more general applicability.
 
 As the old joke goes: "How do you find a lion in the desert? You split
 the desert into two halfs, and the lion is in either one. Then you split