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Author: forstisabella

src/connections/sources/custom-domain.md

@@ -76,6 +76,6 @@ You must be able to delegate a DNS subdomain to Segment and add the name servers
 Segment does not recommended that you change the subdomain after the initial setup. If you change the subdomain, Segment must revoke the older certificates for your subdomain and you will be required to redo the entire onboarding process, as several underlying components, like certificates, would need to be recreated and reassociated. 
 
 ### Who is responsible for managing the SSL certificate for the Custom Domain?
-Because Custom Domains is a managed service that Segment completely runs, Segment hosts and manages SSL Certificate on the Custom Domain. At this time, we do not support importing a certificate you may already have, as Segment requests a SSL certificate on your behalf using AWS Certificate Manager (ACM) when initially setting up your Custom Domain. 
+Segment hosts and manages SSL Certificate on the Custom Domain. At this time, Segment does not support importing a certificate you may already have, as Segment must request a SSL certificate on your behalf using AWS Certificate Manager (ACM) when initially setting up your Custom Domain. 
 
-Segment also uses AWS Certificate Manager (ACM) to manage and automatically renew certificates. Segment has monitors ready to alert our teams in the event of a certificate renewal failure.
+Segment also uses AWS Certificate Manager (ACM) to manage and renew certificates.