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src/privacy/consent-management/consent-in-unify.md

@@ -96,13 +96,13 @@ If you're using Consent Management and Profiles, you shouldn't give your custome
 
 ### Backfill consent preferences on your Profiles
 
-If you've stored end-user consent preferences in your warehouse and would like to make them available to your Profiles, you can use [Reverse ETL](/docs/privacy/consent-management/consent-in-retl/) and [Segment Profiles](/docs/connections/destinations/catalog/actions-segment-profiles/) to extract the consent information from your warehouse and load the information into Segment. 
+If you've stored end-user consent preferences in your warehouse and would like to make them available to your Profiles, use [Reverse ETL](/docs/privacy/consent-management/consent-in-retl/) and [Segment Profiles](/docs/connections/destinations/catalog/actions-segment-profiles/) to extract the consent information from your warehouse and load the information into Segment. 
 
 If you want to use end-user consent coming directly from your single source of truth, you can generate an Identify, Track, or [Segment Consent Preferences Updated](/docs/privacy/consent-management/consent-in-unify/#segment-consent-preference-updated-event) Track event to add [consent information to the `context` object](/docs/privacy/consent-management/consent-in-segment-connections/#consent-object). For more information about the requirements for data collection, see the [Configure Consent Management](/docs/privacy/consent-management/configure-consent-management/#step-2-integrating-your-cmp-with-segment) documentation. 
 
 ## Consent preference conflicts
 
-When collecting end user consent, you can occasionally capture multiple consent preferences linked to the same user, for example, from a user's cell phone browser and the web browser on their laptop (called a [device-level conflict](#device-level-conflict)) or when two distinct Unify profiles are merged together (called a [profile-level conflict](#profile-level-conflict)). 
+When collecting end user consent, you can occasionally capture multiple consent preferences linked to the same user. For example, you might collect consent from a user's cell phone browser and the web browser on their laptop (called a [device-level conflict](#device-level-conflict)) or merge two distinct Unify profiles together (called a [profile-level conflict](#profile-level-conflict)). 
 
 
 ### Device-level conflicts