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Co-authored-by: Michele Cyran <michele@redpanda.com>

Author: kbatuigas

modules/manage/pages/iceberg/iceberg-topics-aws-glue.adoc

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ endif::[]
 AWS Glue does not support partitioning on nested fields. If Redpanda detects that
 the default partitioning `(hour(redpanda.timestamp))` based on the record metadata is in use, it will instead apply an empty partition spec `()`, which means the table will not be partitioned.
 
-If you want to use partitioning, you must implement custom partitioning using your own partition columns (columns that are not nested).
+To use partitioning, you must implement custom partitioning using your own partition columns (that is, columns that are not nested).
 
 [NOTE]
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@@ -55,19 +55,19 @@ The AWS Glue catalog integration does not support automatic deletion of Iceberg
 
 * Set the cluster property config_ref:iceberg_delete,true,properties/cluster-properties[`iceberg_delete`] to `false` when you configure the catalog integration.
 ifndef::env-cloud[]
-* Override the cluster-wide `iceberg_delete` configuration and set the topic property xref:reference:properties/topic-properties.adoc#redpanda-iceberg-delete[`redpanda.iceberg.delete`] to `false` for the topic you want to delete.
+* Override the cluster property `iceberg_delete` by setting the topic property xref:reference:properties/topic-properties.adoc#redpanda-iceberg-delete[`redpanda.iceberg.delete`] to `false` for the topic you want to delete.
 endif::[]
 ifdef::env-cloud[]
-* Override the cluster-wide `iceberg_delete` configuration and set the topic property `redpanda.iceberg.delete` to `false` for the topic you want to delete.
+* Override the cluster property `iceberg_delete` by setting the topic property `redpanda.iceberg.delete` to `false` for the topic you want to delete.
 endif::[]
 
-When `iceberg_delete` or the topic override `redpanda.iceberg.delete` is set to `false`, you can delete the Redpanda topic, and then delete the table in AWS Glue and the Iceberg data and metadata files in the S3 bucket. If your intent is to recreate the topic after deleting it, you are required to delete the table data entirely before recreating the topic.
+When `iceberg_delete` or the topic override `redpanda.iceberg.delete` is set to `false`, you can delete the Redpanda topic, and then delete the table in AWS Glue and the Iceberg data and metadata files in the S3 bucket. If you plan to re-create the topic after deleting it, you must delete the table data entirely before re-creating the topic.
 
 == Authorize access to AWS Glue
 
 You must allow Redpanda access to AWS Glue services in your AWS account. You can use the same access credentials that you configured for S3 (IAM role, access keys, and KMS key), as long as you have also added read and write access to AWS Glue Data Catalog.
 
-For example, you could create a separate IAM policy that manages access to AWS Glue, and attach it to the IAM role that Redpanda also uses to access S3. It is recommended to add all AWS Glue API actions in the policy (`"glue:*"`) on the following resources:
+For example, you could create a separate IAM policy that manages access to AWS Glue and attach it to the IAM role that Redpanda also uses to access S3. Add all AWS Glue API actions in the policy (`"glue:*"`) on the following resources:
 
 - Root catalog (`catalog`)
 - All databases (`database/*`)

modules/manage/partials/iceberg/use-iceberg-catalogs.adoc

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ The following shows the current status of Iceberg catalog integrations. Check th
 |===
 endif::[]
 
-Other REST catalogs such as Apache Polaris, Dremio Nessie (to be link:https://www.dremio.com/newsroom/polaris-catalog-to-be-merged-with-nessie-now-available-on-github/[merged with Polaris]), and the Apache reference implementation have been tested but are not regularly verified. For more information, contact https://support.redpanda.com/hc/en-us/requests/new[Redpanda Support^].
+Other REST catalogs, such as Apache Polaris, Dremio Nessie (to be link:https://www.dremio.com/newsroom/polaris-catalog-to-be-merged-with-nessie-now-available-on-github/[merged with Polaris]), and the Apache reference implementation, have been tested but are not regularly verified. For more information, contact https://support.redpanda.com/hc/en-us/requests/new[Redpanda Support^].
 
 === Set cluster properties