Update docs/changelogs/v0.22.md

Co-authored-by: Steve Loeppky <biglep@protocol.ai>

Author: Jorropo

docs/changelogs/v0.22.md

@@ -24,16 +24,11 @@ to V2 only in the future.
 
 **TODO**: add links to IPIP https://github.com/ipfs/specs/issues/376
 
-# go-libp2p v0.29.0 update
+# go-libp2p v0.29.0 update with smart dialing
 
-We updated from [go-libp2p](https://github.com/libp2p/go-libp2p) [v0.27.7](https://github.com/libp2p/go-libp2p/releases/tag/v0.27.7) to [v0.29.0](https://github.com/libp2p/go-libp2p/releases/tag/v0.29.0).
+We updated from [go-libp2p](https://github.com/libp2p/go-libp2p) [v0.27.7](https://github.com/libp2p/go-libp2p/releases/tag/v0.27.7) to [v0.29.0](https://github.com/libp2p/go-libp2p/releases/tag/v0.29.0).  This release includes smart dialing, which is a prioritization algorithm that will try to rank addresses and protocols rather than attempting all options in parallel.  Anecdotally, we have observed [Kubo nodes make 30% less dials](https://github.com/libp2p/go-libp2p/issues/2326#issuecomment-1644332863) with no to low latency impact.
 
-The main intresting new feature is smart dialling, this is a prioritisation algorithm that will try to rank addresses and protocols.
-So when we are contacting one peer we aren't firing ~4 connections at attempts in parallel anymore.
-
-This includes a breaking change to `ipfs id` and some of the `ipfs swarm` commands, we do not report `ProtocolVersion` anymore.
-
-This used to be harcoded `ipfs/0.1.0` and sent to other peers but never did anything intresting.
+This includes a breaking change to `ipfs id` and some of the `ipfs swarm` commands.  We no longer report `ProtocolVersion`.  This used to be hardcoded as `ipfs/0.1.0` and sent to other peers but was not providing any distinguishing value.
 
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