Presentation: Feedback from Stefan

Author: dabch

presentation/figures/diagrams_ram.tex

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
             title={Memory use on the laptop},
             height=.7\textheight,
             xlabel={depth of the \gls{access-tree}},
-            ylabel={kilobytes},
+            ylabel={KB},
             xmin=0.75, xmax=4.25,
             ymin=0, ymax=360000,
             xtick=data,
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
         \addplot [color=blue, mark=none] {83560};
         \addlegendentry{YCT Enc};
         \addplot [color=orange, mark=none] {22616};
-        \addplot [color=black, dashed, mark=none] {256000};
+        \addplot [color=red, thick, dashed, mark=none] {256000} node [below,pos=.925, anchor=north east, font=\small] {SoC RAM size};
     \end{axis}
     \end{tikzpicture}
 \end{minipage}

presentation/figures/evaluation-tree.tex

@@ -1,16 +1,14 @@
 \begin{figure}
-    \begin{tikzpicture}
-        \tikzstyle{every node}=[circle, draw];
+    \begin{tikzpicture}[inner/.style={circle}, l/.style={font=\small, align=center}]
+        \tikzstyle{every node}=[draw];
         \only<1>{
             \tikzstyle{level 1}=[sibling distance=2cm];
-            \draw (0,0) node (root) [anchor=south] {4} child {node {A}} child {node {B}} child {node {C}} child {node {D}};
+            \draw (0,0) node[inner] (root) [anchor=south] {4} child {node {A}} child {node {B}} child {node {C}} child {node {D}};
         }
         \only<2>{
             \tikzstyle{level 1}=[sibling distance=1cm];
-            \draw (0,0) node (root) [anchor=south] {8} child {node {A}} child {node {B}} child {node {C}} child {node {D}} child {node {E}} child {node {F}} child {node {G}};
-        }
-
-            
+            \draw (0,0) node[inner] (root) [anchor=south] {8} child {node {A}} child {node {B}} child {node {C}} child {node {D}} child {node {E}} child {node {F}} child {node {G}};
+        }           
     \end{tikzpicture}
     \caption*{Flat access tree}
 \end{figure}
@@ -27,17 +25,17 @@
 % \end{figure}}
 
 \begin{figure}
-    \begin{tikzpicture}
-        \tikzstyle{every node}=[circle, draw];
+    \begin{tikzpicture}[inner/.style={circle}, l/.style={font=\small, align=center}]
+        \tikzstyle{every node}=[draw];
         \tikzstyle{level 1}=[sibling distance=4cm, level distance=1cm];
         \tikzstyle{level 2}=[sibling distance=2cm, level distance=1.5cm];
         \tikzstyle{level 3}=[sibling distance=1cm, level distance=1.5cm];
 
-        \only<1>{\draw (0,0) node (root) [anchor=south] {2} child {node {2} child {node {A}} child  {node {B}}} child {node {2} child {node {C}} child  {node {D}}};}
+        \only<1>{\draw (0,0) node[inner] (root) [anchor=south] {2} child {node[inner] {2} child {node {A}} child  {node {B}}} child {node[inner] {2} child {node {C}} child  {node {D}}};}
 
-        \only<2>{\draw (0,0) node (root) [anchor=south] {2} 
-            child {node {2} child { node {2} child {node {A}} child {node {B}}} child {node {2} child {node {C}} child {node {D}}}}
-            child {node {2} child { node {2} child {node {D}} child {node {E}}} child { node {2} child {node {F}} child {node {G}}}
+        \only<2>{\draw (0,0) node[inner] (root) [anchor=south] {2} 
+            child {node[inner] {2} child { node[inner] {2} child {node {A}} child {node {B}}} child { node[inner] {2} child {node {C}} child {node {D}}}}
+            child {node[inner] {2} child { node[inner] {2} child {node {D}} child {node {E}}} child { node[inner] {2} child {node {F}} child {node {G}}}
         };}
     \end{tikzpicture}
     \caption*{Perfect binary access tree (depth \only<1>{2}\only<2>{3})}

presentation/presentation.tex

@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ \section{Results}
         \begin{block}{\centering GPSW}
             \begin{itemize}
                 \item Encryption takes up to 8.5\,s, decryption up to 80\,s
-                \item RAM shortage puts hard limit on policy size (two levels), even if using \textbf{entire} available RAM!
+                \item RAM shortage puts hard limit on policy size (two levels), even if using entire available RAM!
             \end{itemize}
         \end{block}
         \column{.49\textwidth}