From afb7332f6f87b0c779688dc6d6408ebd332dec42 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nyx102 <168144704+Nyx102@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 10 Sep 2024 19:37:11 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Fix errors in text This is partially to fix the text and partially to test the GitHub Action --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md index 6aa39ef..454159a 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ The girl seemed completely lifeless. While she most assuredly was alive, nothing He took a half step back. -This is one of those times where I shouldn’t get involved, isn’t it? +This is one of those times when I shouldn’t get involved, isn’t it? Almost certain of that, he decided to turn back. He didn’t think silly things like “I wonder what kind of things she’s worrying about,” or “I wonder if she has issues.” @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ It’d be fine to stop the conversation here. Even if he left without another wo “Okay, then I’d like you to sit and listen for a bit. A long time ago, this place was the place of a great mine. After a nearby island reformed their currency, a ton of miners came here. Their equipment got shipped in one after another. They couldn’t keep up at all building enough living space.” -The girl tilted her head as Feodor went on. “That mine’s completely dried up by now, but traces of it are still around. Like how this city is made of metal and rivets, or how there’s a lot of slopes which were originally part of the mountain, or how the machinery scattered around the housing district is still operating…” +The girl tilted her head as Feodor went on. “That mine’s completely dried up by now, but traces of it are still around. Like how this city is made of metal and rivets, or how there are a lot of slopes that were originally part of the mountain, or how the machinery scattered around the housing district is still operating…” “Uh, okay? I can tell it’s an odd-looking place just from seeing it.” The girl looked back at the city. “There’s no soil anywhere, but somehow the ground kinda feels warm. It’s completely different from the towns built with stone. It’s a little strange.” @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ The warmth she felt might have been the network of pipes and machinery that circ “Are you…fighting something?” -The girl gave a honest nod. “I’m glad you came and talked to me. Even when I was walking around there wasn’t anybody anywhere. I almost wondered, has everyone gone extinct already? It was a little scary.” +The girl gave an honest nod. “I’m glad you came and talked to me. Even when I was walking around there wasn’t anybody anywhere. I almost wondered, has everyone gone extinct already? It was a little scary.” “Oh, I know what you’re talking about. When you’re the only thing moving, everything else is still, and it feels like it’s after the world’s ended.” @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ She looked perplexed. “Alright?” Right on cue, the phenomenon Feodor had just described occurred. -Its temperature was not particularly high, nor was there any concern to be had about its pressure or volume. Even if one were to be hit directly, there was no risk of getting burned by the steam. To a citizen of Lyell, it was the kind of mundane incident one saw everyday. +Its temperature was not particularly high, nor was there any concern to be had about its pressure or volume. Even if one were to be hit directly, there was no risk of getting burned by the steam. To a citizen of Lyell, it was the kind of mundane incident one saw every day. “Wh-whaaaaaaaa—?!” @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ And then she sneezed. “Hee-choo!” “I’ll do that.” The girl shook herself vigorously like a small dog. “Oh, um…thanks for telling me it was dangerous. Even if it didn’t really help.” -“The last bit was uncalled for, but you’re welcome. Now go on,” he shooed her away with a hand. “Be off, be off.” +“The last bit was uncalled-for, but you’re welcome. Now go on,” he shooed her away with a hand. “Be off, be off.” “Okay. Ew-choo!” After a rather cute-sounding sneeze, the girl turned away from Feodor. “Um, this might sound strange, seeing as we don’t even know each other’s names, but…” @@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ On Island No. 13, every object and living being was dissolved into a transparent On Island No. 39, every last thing was transformed into beautiful shining black crystal pillars. -The real problem began afterwards. +The real problem began afterward. The Beasts cannot fly. Consequently, the Beasts who had engulfed Island No. 13 and devoured Island No. 39 remained on each respective island. At the moment, they didn’t possess the means to invade the other islands. However, the immortal Beasts could live on the floating islands indefinitely. @@ -292,4 +292,4 @@ Even knowing that destruction would arrive, it was impossible to avoid. The first rumors began to circulate about half a year ago. Upon hearing it, a fraction of Lyell’s citizens immediately fled to other islands. As the time left decreased, more than half of those who remained gradually followed their neighbors. The amount of people in Lyell now amounted to less than a fifth of what it was five years ago, barely maintaining the semblance of a city. -Although Lyell was not yet dead, the city’s life had already gone; it existed now as a mere hollow shell that hadn’t completely fallen. A miniature world nearing its end. \ No newline at end of file +Although Lyell was not yet dead, the city’s life had already gone; it existed now as a mere hollow shell that hadn’t completely fallen. A miniature world nearing its end.