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-# Loading Data Into Apollo with DataStax Bulk Loader
-This example will demonstrate how to load data into Apollo two different ways, from a CSV file or from another Cassandra table
+# Loading Data into Apollo with DataStax Bulk Loader
+If you're trying to load data into Apollo from a CSV file or from an existing Cassandra table, then you've come to the right place. This example shows how to quickly load data into Apollo using the [DataStax Bulk Loader](https://docs.datastax.com/en/dsbulk/doc/index.html) (DSBulk for short).
 
 Contributors: [Dave Bechberger](https://github.com/bechbd) based on the work of [Brian Hess](https://github.com/brianmhess)
 
 ## Objectives
 
-* To demonstrate how to load data into Apollo from a CSV file or from an existing table in a Cassandra keyspace
+* Show how to load data into Apollo from a CSV file on the filesystem or from an existing table in Cassandra
 
 ## Project Layout
 
 * [data.csv](data.csv) - The CSV data to load
 * [schema.cql](schema.cql) - The CQL schema used for this example
 
-## How this Sample Works
-Loading data into Apollo using DS Bulk is much like loading data into other Cassandra databases with the addition of the requirement to specify the secure database bundle as well as the username and password for the database.
+## How this Works
+Loading data into Apollo using DSBulk is much like loading data into other Cassandra databases with the addition of the requirement to specify the [secure connect bundle](https://docs.datastax.com/en/apollo/aws/doc/dscloud/apollo/dscloudObtainingCredentials.html) as well as the username and password for your Apollo database.
 
-The secure database bundle is specified using the `-b <INSERT PATH>` parameter on the command line. [See here for more details](https://docs.datastax.com/en/dsbulk/doc/dsbulk/reference/driverOptions.html#driverOptions__driverBasicCloudSecureConnectBundle)
+The secure connect bundle is specified using the `-b <INSERT PATH>` parameter on the command line. [See here for more details](https://docs.datastax.com/en/dsbulk/doc/dsbulk/reference/driverOptions.html#driverOptions__driverBasicCloudSecureConnectBundle)
 
 The username is specified using the `-u <INSERT USERNAME>` parameter on the command line.  [See here for more details](https://docs.datastax.com/en/dsbulk/doc/dsbulk/reference/driverOptions.html#driverOptions__datastaxJavaDriverAdvancedConnectionAuthProviderUsername)
 
 The password is specified using the `-p <INSERT PASSWORD>` parameter on the command line.  [See here for more details](https://docs.datastax.com/en/dsbulk/doc/dsbulk/reference/driverOptions.html#driverOptions__datastaxJavaDriverAdvancedConnectionAuthProviderPassword)
 
-This example only touches on some of the basic functionality for DS Bulk.  DS Bulk has all the functionality to perform complex loading operations to Apollo as it does to other DSE clusters.  To read about some of those scenarios please check the following links below for more information:
+This example only touches the tip of the iceberg of functionality. DSBulk has all the functionality to perform complex loading operations to Apollo as it does to other DDAC and DSE clusters. Check out the docs below for details of the other things it can do:
 
 * [DataStax Bulk Loader Documentation](https://docs.datastax.com/en/dsbulk/doc/)
 * [DataStax Bulk Loader: Introduction and Loading](https://academy.datastax.com/content/datastax-bulk-loader-introduction-and-loading)
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 * DS Bulk v1.4.0 or greater
 * An Apollo cluster with the schema ([from schema.cql](schema.cql)) loaded and credential information
-    **Note** If you need further instruction on how to obtain the secure database bundle for your Apollo instance then please refer to the documentation located [here](https://docs.datastax.com/en/apollo/aws/doc/dscloud/apollo/dscloudObtainingCredentials.html).
+    **Note** If you need further instruction on how to obtain the secure connect bundle for your Apollo instance then please refer to the documentation located [here](https://docs.datastax.com/en/apollo/aws/doc/dscloud/apollo/dscloudObtainingCredentials.html).
 * A Cassandra cluster (optional if you want to load from Cassandra)
 
 ### Running