diff --git a/src/SUMMARY.md b/src/SUMMARY.md
index 55c9128..1686b48 100644
--- a/src/SUMMARY.md
+++ b/src/SUMMARY.md
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
    - [Software development best practices](node-software/development-practices.md)
    - [Build process](node-software/build-process.md)
    - [Release engineering](node-software/release-engineering.md)
+   - [Monitoring](node-software/monitoring.md)
    - [Communication channels]() <!-- node-software/communication-channels.md -->
    - [Runtime environment]() <!-- node-software/runtime-environment.md -->
    - [Hardware requirements]() <!-- node-software/hardware-requirements.md -->
-   - [Monitoring](node-software/monitoring.md)
    - [Operator interface]() <!-- (node-software/operator-interface.md) -->
diff --git a/src/node-software/monitoring.md b/src/node-software/monitoring.md
index 8141a88..f0be6a3 100644
--- a/src/node-software/monitoring.md
+++ b/src/node-software/monitoring.md
@@ -1,10 +1,17 @@
 # Monitoring
 
 As [we described previously](../chorus-one/monitoring-alerting.md),
-at Chorus One we use [Prometheus][prometheus] for monitoring and alerting.
+we use [Prometheus][prometheus] for monitoring and alerting.
 This is the industry-standard monitoring protocol
 that is supported by most software we run.
 
+Exposing metrics is essential for any blockchain project.
+Without it, the node software is a black box to us,
+and the only thing we could observe is whether the process is still running,
+which is not the same as being healthy.
+We need to know what’s going on _inside_ that process,
+and the standard way of doing that is through logs and Prometheus metrics.
+
 [prometheus]: https://prometheus.io/
 
 ## Prometheus
@@ -21,7 +28,7 @@ Alternatively, a dedicated metrics port works fine too.
 
 While the set of metrics is of course application-specific,
 blockchain networks generally have a concept of the _block height_.
-Note that unless the block height is for a finalized fork,
+Unless the block height is for a finalized fork,
 block height is generally a [gauge][prometheus-gauge]
 and not a [counter][prometheus-counter].
 
@@ -31,8 +38,8 @@ and not a [counter][prometheus-counter].
 
 #### Expose metrics privately. {.p1 #expose-metrics-privately}
 
-While _we_ want to scape metrics,
-we don’t want to expose confidential information to third parties.
+We need to scape metrics internally,
+but we don’t want to expose confidential information to third parties.
 It should be possible for the http server that serves the `/metrics` endpoint
 to listen on a network interface that is not Internet-exposed.
 
@@ -40,7 +47,8 @@ to listen on a network interface that is not Internet-exposed.
 
 Prometheus [has an official standard for naming metrics and labels][prometheus-naming].
 Following the standard ensures that metrics are self-explanatory and easy to use,
-and that our alerting configuration is consistent and uniform. In particular:
+and enables us to write alerting configuration that is consistent and uniform.
+In particular:
 
  * Prefix the metric with the name of your application.
  * Metrics should use base units (bytes and seconds, not kilobytes or milliseconds).
@@ -50,13 +58,34 @@ and that our alerting configuration is consistent and uniform. In particular:
 
 [prometheus-naming]: https://prometheus.io/docs/practices/naming/
 
-<!-- TODO: Finish this section
-
-## Telementry
-
-TODO.
-* Have a way to disable.
-* We are fine to share on incentivized testnets.
-* We do not grant SSH access to our infrastructure, period.
-
--->
+## Telemetry
+
+We understand that node software authors
+need visibility into how their software runs to inform development
+— that is the reason we are publishing this network handbook in the first place.
+However, we are subject to legal and compliance requirements,
+which mean that we cannot always allow software to phone home.
+In particular,
+in some cases we are under non-disclosure agreements.
+
+On incentivized testnets we are happy to share telemetry data.
+In these cases we only operate our own identity,
+and the risk of telemetry exposing confidential information is low.
+For mainnets we do not allow telemetry data to be shared.
+
+#### Ensure telemetry can be disabled. {.p2 #telemetry-can-be-disabled}
+As described above,
+some confidential information we cannot share for legal and compliance reasons.
+The easiest way to prevent inadvertently exposing confidential information,
+is to expose as little information as possible.
+
+## Troubleshooting
+
+In case of bugs that are difficult to reproduce,
+we are happy to work with you to share relevant information, logs,
+try patches, etc.
+**Under no circumstance
+does Chorus One grant access to our infrastructure to third parties.**
+We definitely do not grant SSH access or other forms of remote access.
+If we did,
+we would not be able to guarantee the integrity of our infrastructure.