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  1. Rephrased the first sentence for better readability:
  • Changed "any person obtaining a copy of this software and associated documentation files" to "any individual obtaining a copy of this software and accompanying documentation files."
  1. Simplified the wording in the clause about allowing others to use the software:
  • Changed "to permit persons to whom the Software is furnished" to "to permit others to whom the Software is provided."
  1. Changed punctuation for clarity:
  • Added a comma after "AS IS" and also revised the quotation marks around it.
  1. Minor rephrasing for consistency:

-Changed "WITHOUT WARRANTY OF ANY KIND, EXPRESS OR IMPLIED, INCLUDING BUT NOT LIMITED TO THE WARRANTIES" to "WITHOUT WARRANTY OF ANY KIND, EXPRESS OR IMPLIED, INCLUDING BUT NOT LIMITED TO WARRANTIES" (removing "the" before warranties for smoother flow).

Rephrased the first sentence for better readability:

Changed "any person obtaining a copy of this software and associated documentation files" to "any individual obtaining a copy of this software and accompanying documentation files."
Simplified the wording in the clause about allowing others to use the software:

Changed "to permit persons to whom the Software is furnished" to "to permit others to whom the Software is provided."
Changed punctuation for clarity:

Added a comma after "AS IS" and also revised the quotation marks around it.
Minor rephrasing for consistency:

Changed "WITHOUT WARRANTY OF ANY KIND, EXPRESS OR IMPLIED, INCLUDING BUT NOT LIMITED TO THE WARRANTIES" to "WITHOUT WARRANTY OF ANY KIND, EXPRESS OR IMPLIED, INCLUDING BUT NOT LIMITED TO WARRANTIES" (removing "the" before warranties for smoother flow).
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@eltociear @ChenyangSi @xizhedong can u check this

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