Update index.md

Author: Bwaris94

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 > This is **`coding.blog`**
+AI- driven personalised, curation service for quality programming content. 
 
-A blog platform for developers, for everything coding.
+A platform for developers, that provides you with a personalised curation service on programming topics. 
+Use it to write and read quality articles on programming. 
 *Not* for content-marketing disguised as programming tutorials.
 *Not* for advertisement blended with sincerely interesting pieces.
 *Quality*. *Articles*. *About*. *Coding*.
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 Today, it feels like most articles are trying to sell you something. They are,
 as they cannot reach you for free. Curators like Medium need to put work into
 ensuring you get the articles you would enjoy. To compensate, they either
-put the content behind paywalls or shift the costs to the authors. Now authors
-need to bear the cost, they need to make sure their writings are selling you something.
-
-No one is evil here. The process makes everything either hidden behind a paywall or 
-an ad dressed up as a coding blog. The process needs to change.
+put the content behind paywalls or shift the costs to the authors. They also curate with only the content available on their platform. 
 
+Truth be told: there is tonnes of content out there. The problem is finding interesting and truly insightful pieces based on your personal needs. 
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 > > _Today, it feels like most articles are trying to sell you something. They are,
@@ -55,32 +54,24 @@ an ad dressed up as a coding blog. The process needs to change.
 
 With `coding.blog`, we want to change that. 
 
-We want to help authors write elegant, modern coding blogs while retaining ownership of their work.
-
-We believe authors should rely on the support and appreciation
-of the community for sharing their knowledge, not on the support of companies who
-monetize your time and attention to convince you to buy from them.
-
-We want quality writings on coding to be freely available to everyone.
-We want to empower authors so that they do not have to disguise their
-content to sell other stuff to you indirectly. The software
-community has thrived on sharing openly and honestly. This is how we should
+We want quality writings on coding blog to be freely available to everyone.
+We want to empower authors to write elegant, modern coding blogs while retaining ownership of their work.
+The software community has thrived on sharing openly and honestly. This is how we should
 move forward.
 
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 > _How?_
 
-- `coding.blog` will make every article available for free, while allowing
-the community to support the authors by tipping them.
+- `coding.blog` will make every article available for free. We will also not restrict our curation service to articles published only on our platform but will find all freely accessible quality pieces. 
 
-- `coding.blog` will offer per-user curated lists to readers who want it, for a small monthly fee.
-Curation is never really free, but with transparent direct pricing, it can become
+- `coding.blog` will offer per-user curated lists to readers not based on how often you click on certain articles but really accounting for your needs. We will charge a small monthly fee for this. Curation is never really free, but with transparent direct pricing, it can become
 free of content that is there only to convince you to buy something, leaving only content
 that you would truly enjoy.
 
 - `coding.blog` will provide an [open-source toolchain](https://codedoc.cc) for building 
-elegant blogs, offering the convenience of platforms like Medium, rich features specificly 
+elegant blogs, offering the convenience of platforms like Medium, rich features specifically 
 designed for writing about programming, and customizability that only comes 
 with open-source tools.
 
@@ -110,7 +101,9 @@ the authors retain full control and ownership over their work.
 
 `coding.blog` is still in early stages of development. If you are interested, you can join
 us on this exciting journey towards creating the best medium possible for sharing 
-coding knowledge and experience. Simply enlist for the waiting list for `coding.blog`'s
+coding knowledge and experience. 
+
+For our persoanlsied curation service, simply enlist for the waiting list for `coding.blog`'s
 beta.
 
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